It's May 21, 2024, 09:06:16 AM
I WENT TO STAPLES CENTER WEN I WAS WALKING MY GOLD RAG FALL OF MY POCKET AND THE GROUND WAS WET TO AND DIRTY MY RAG GOT DIRTY A LIL BIT PULL IT IT BACK AND MAKE SURE IT WOULD NOT DROP AGAIN ROCKING MY RAG AGAIN HOMIE 8
I think that the intro shouldn't have had the little rhyme in it, it could confuse people in a way that they think that the 1st verse already started while it haven't, and that just doesn't sound good as a intro, if you're already known you can do that, but right now for a track on soundclick people will turn it of and skip to another artist 'cause they think it sucks, other then that the track is not bad at all, the verses had some nice flows, just ain't really feelin' the voices, or maybe that's because of the recording quality, it's different then the quality of the beat which doesn't sound good, but you can't help that... Overall it's a great track, not something I would listen to all the time, but good for what it is.
I think that the intro shouldn't have had the little rhyme in it, it could confuse people in a way that they think that the 1st verse already started while it haven't, and that just doesn't sound good as a intro, if you're already known you can do that, but right now for a track on soundclick people will turn it of and skip to another artist 'cause they think it sucks
Aight, good to see you actually did something with my review, I like it now, you don't got people confused of what's coming, which is important if you try to promote your shit. Stay up!