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Summer Reminiscing
« on: August 07, 2006, 08:51:05 PM »
Lemme know what ya'll think, this was a song I made in the spur of the moment kinda, was really feelin' the weather, and had a dope beat playin' in the background.  It's supposed to be pretty mellow, but have some depth to it at the same time :


[Verse 1 - bLaDe]
It's gettin hot these days but i'm feelin kinda fresh,
Yo I gotta job these days but i'm livin by the cheque,
Still a lotta who taught their ways belivin in the tech,
Never really knock the ways of gainin some respect,
Still gotta lot to say, thats the reason why im vexed,
I could never stop the  bleedin' heart beatin in my chest,
Stay true nonstop cause cheatin aint progress,
They would never stop the struggle like my peeps in the projects,
when bodies drop on rubble, it'll be the grievin who confess,
Once we pop the bubble its the treason that comes next,
Gather some priests together we could use some healin in the west,
But nah, drop the rocks, it aint the season to be stressed,
readin the text realizin that i'm exceedingly blessed,
Feelin the finesse, delivering the lyrical heat with success,
Brothaz bobbin yo head to the beat that got my peeps possessed,
Leavin ya calculatin your technique like i'm leadin in chess,


[Hook x2]
Been a long time since I felt so fresh,
Feelin' so smooth gettin this shit off my chest,
I'm just an ordinary brother in this world of G's,
Droppin keys in sync with the rhythm of my heartbeats


[Verse 2 - bLaDe]
Yo It's probably the breeze that keeps me on my toes,
And it's probably the sea that keeps me in my boat,
Theres a part of me that's deep and seeks to oppose,
My philosophy is oblique I speak and expose,
I breath and I flow, spiritual essence of my soul,
leadin the show, reminicin about my adolescent goals,
Read and I know, wisdom stored in crescent scrolls,
Depression is cold and it was pressing on hope,yo
Expressin my self hopin that the agression will melt,
Realized I was exponentially effecting my health,
Yo let me go back into time and think about the past,
It's happened some times, I thought i'd sink without some cash,
It was a habit of mine, to swing when I was rash,
And as havoc combined, yo my ink began to slash,
Maybe I was lacking a sign or wind against my mast,
But now i'm relaxed and reclined, there's enough inside the glass,



[Hook x2]
Been a long time since I felt so fresh,
Feelin' so smooth gettin this shit off my chest,
I'm just an ordinary brother in this world of G's,
Droppin keys in sync with the rhythm of my heartbeats


[Verse 3 - bLaDe]
It's got a little to do with streets that I was born on,
Maybe a little to do with the peeps that have gone on,
And the flow spawns as I remember moments long gone,
Always hold even though the cause is forlorn,
until the break of dawn, tryin to shake the yawn,
Goals bigger and better caused me to forsake the pawns,
It's the childhood memories have shaped me into the man that I am,
The Devils can't touch it as long as I clutch it in my right hand,
Continue to fight man, the struggle is long since over,
It's the thought that keeps me alive and my mind sober,
There's no room for violence, let the peace persist,
Straight from the womb my dialects preach cease and desist,
Gettin harder to see the fists, father please forgive,
the Flow in my viens,thats why my ateries are lit
Reflectin on my expression as symbiotic keys exist,
My mind caught in the mix I forgot the part of me thats pissed,

[Hook x2]
Been a long time since I felt so fresh,
Feelin' so smooth gettin this shit off my chest,
I'm just an ordinary brother in this world of G's,
Droppin keys in sync with the rhythm of my heartbeats



If you guys are interested in hearin the recorded version, head on over here:

http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?topic=116809.0

Thanks, peace

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Re: Summer Reminiscing
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2006, 06:37:33 AM »
Great work Blade, that's a beautiful song, well-thought out, emotions are captured in picture perfect form.. can't wait to hear it.  You right songs that are full, not just a tight line here and there, but full, complete songs.. peace.
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Re: Summer Reminiscing
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2006, 09:56:32 AM »
Real tight, real tight. Really liked that.
« Last Edit: August 14, 2006, 01:01:28 PM by QuietTruth »
 

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Re: Summer Reminiscing
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2006, 10:40:07 AM »
very dope lyric indeed
 

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Re: Summer Reminiscing
« Reply #4 on: August 11, 2006, 11:31:59 PM »
Very well written and extremely vivid song.  Throughout the entire song alot of examples just clearly pop out at you which makes it enjoyable to listen to and it's not a bad cruising song  ;D