I Need Ya'll Help...Should I put this song as a bonus track on my mixtape???

[JAG]

This is a song I did called "Feenin," and the structure of the song is basically that people fiend for weight (1st verse), the females fiend for me (2nd verse), and people fiend for my music (3rd verse).  I'm not the biggest fan of this record, but a lot of my friends think I should put it as a bonus track on my mixtape.  I put up a link to download the song, and I'd appreciate if ya'll would be brutally honest with me about the song, and let me know if ya'll think I should put this on my mixtape as a bonus track.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/oa17el

["THE" MoSav]

Ill be BRUTALLY honest 
I am downloading right now

["THE" MoSav]

I really liked the HOOK!!!
Put it on the mixtape for sure, cool lyrics, and i like the beat BUT THE HOOK I LOVE (no Homo)

"Everybody screaming that Jag got em fiendin" 

[bizzle]

Good shitt its'a good track man

["THE" MoSav]

Where u from JAG?

[JAG]

Where u from JAG?

i was born in watts, but i was raised and still live in south central.

["THE" MoSav]

Where u from JAG?

i was born in watts, but i was raised and still live in south central.

oh okay...i could tell you were from Southern Cali, i was just wondering from where...yeah im feelin youre shit...you gonna hook us up with a mixtape when it drops?

[JAG]

Where u from JAG?

i was born in watts, but i was raised and still live in south central.

oh okay...i could tell you were from Southern Cali, i was just wondering from where...yeah im feelin youre shit...you gonna hook us up with a mixtape when it drops?

yeah i definitely want to spread the mixtape to everybody as soon as it drops.  i'm finishing up a couple more tracks, and all i basically have to do is get a few of my original records slightly mixed so that the levels and sound quality are on point.  i think that i'm going to leave feenin off of the mixtape if i can't get my man to remix it with a better beat. 

["THE" MoSav]

thats up to you.....But i was feeling that track. and youre quality sounded good

[JAG]

thats up to you.....But i was feeling that track. and youre quality sounded good

the quality on feenin' is cool, but i have to get a couple different tracks up to par.  hopefully i'll be done with the mixtape next week though.  then i'll just have to take care of the logistical stuff like the artwork, host, etc.  i apprecaite all the feedback though homie.

[NFX]

chorus is tite. Both the volume levels and the musical style between verse and chorus is rough though.

it's like it goes from a smooth ridin track in the chorus to a anthem like banga with a southern snare rolls in the verse. Both parts seperate have their good points but together they don't mix in my opinion.

["THE" MoSav]

chorus is tite. Both the volume levels and the musical style between verse and chorus is rough though.

it's like it goes from a smooth ridin track in the chorus to a anthem like banga with a southern snare rolls in the verse. Both parts seperate have their good points but together they don't mix in my opinion.

yeah thats true, i noticed that kind of...But i didnt think it sounded that bad, but im not a producer so im sure i dont have as good of an ear to hear those little things that perfect a track....

[Rud]

dont sleep on Jag people, dubcnn all over the hottest new talent (look at bad lucc and damani now rolling with WU/Soopafly/Snoop Dogg) - DONT SLEEP ON JAG!

www.dubcnn.com/features/onthecomeup/jag

[Tha G In Deee]

dont sleep on Jag people, dubcnn all over the hottest new talent (look at bad lucc and damani now rolling with WU/Soopafly/Snoop Dogg) - DONT SLEEP ON JAG!

www.dubcnn.com/features/onthecomeup/jag

^Real talk...props to DubCNN for puttin' that feature up a while ago, if I didn't see that page weeks ago, I wouldn't know who Jag was...but no doubt, this "Feenin" track is FIRE...tha hook is HOT, you should definitely add it to the mixtape