Author Topic: As I Fade Away  (Read 220 times)

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As I Fade Away
« on: October 19, 2006, 11:44:28 AM »
Hook:
As I fade away to my grave
Hoping people still remember my name
Remember what I gave
Heading to the soul plane
Down I lay
As death takes me away

Verse:
I’m being loaded up on a gurney
Twisting and turning, my heart burning
A single tear drops from my eye, I know it’s my time
Holdin the hand of my wife, flashes of my life
Pass me by, but I do nothing but lay and sigh
But I’m unable to escape my right to die
I’m finally in a hospital bed, telling everyone not to fret
People looking upset, but I pass with no regrets
My life meter grows bleaker, I brace for my heavenly leader
For eternity my sound will bump through your speaker
Already GOD settin my soul free
Images growing blurry unable to see
Watch me die as diabetes beats with me ease
Death can be the world’s biggest tease
Good thing I never did anything wrong
Moms puts her hand over my forehead and tells me just to move on

Hook:
As I fade away to my grave
Hoping people still remember my name
Remember what I gave
Heading to the soul plane
Down I lay
As death takes me away

Verse 2:
Now I’m a soul hovering over my own self
My family crying for help
Doctor checks my pulse and shakes his head
He tells them I’m dead, everyone’s face turns red
I possess their body and telekinetically speak
To them, easing their grief
I take to everyone then last my son
I tell him only my body is done, I will be here just above
In the door way I can see the angle of death
He says you’ve already taken you last breath
But he says I still have a job to perform on earth
Apparently something that was already set at birth
He said raid the dreams of aspiring true emcees
Infect the mind of unsuspecting teens
While my son sleeps I flew into him and spoke to his soul
Then he awoke and oh my GOD he wrote

Hook:
As I fade away to my grave
Hoping people still remember my name
Remember what I gave
Heading to the soul plane
Down I lay
As death takes me away

Verse 3:
I am reborn, my soul appears on a paper through every line
I’m a ghost trapped in a pen, stimulating your mind
Beyond the grave still changing the game
Though I am slain, my flow infecting you veins
That’s me making the hair stand up on the back
Of you neck everytime you lace a track
Splittin my time between heaven and earth
On earth, infecting minds at birth
Helping you little brother and your sister write a verse
In the heavens playin cards with a person who just took a ride a hearse
Kicking it with legends who got stories to tell
Startin cyphers with pac, notorious, and Big L
You too, when you are beyond the brink
Of death, just think, you live through an MC’s ink
No we aren’t a thing of the past
Still infecting the mass, still lyrically kickin ass


DYNAMIC
« Last Edit: October 19, 2006, 11:48:38 AM by Dynamic »
Francis, M to the iz-H phenominal
Gun rest under your vest by the abdominal
Two auto-matos, used to call me fatso
Now you call me Castro, my rap flows
militant, y'all faggots ain't killin' shit
~ Notorious BIG
 

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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2006, 12:09:18 PM »
Shits so original...that was real deep. Real strong lyrics. You know you got it..keep it up!!
 

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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2006, 11:33:18 AM »
dayamn, this is extremely deep, felt it a lot.
keep it up
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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #3 on: November 09, 2006, 11:35:19 AM »
 :o

that shit was sick ass fuck!!!!!!!!!!



Pick up 2 gats like Riley with a full 16 clip, on some sick shit like Lynch, while rippin a bitch's clit with beyonce's mouth on the tip of my dick.

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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #4 on: November 09, 2006, 12:36:29 PM »
Real nice!  Keep it up!
 

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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #5 on: November 11, 2006, 12:03:35 PM »
verty good have you ever thought of sending some of your shit to dre?I can give yoiu the hook if you want it..........
don't quote mre boy I ain't said shit "yet"
 

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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #6 on: November 13, 2006, 02:24:09 PM »
verty good have you ever thought of sending some of your shit to dre?I can give yoiu the hook if you want it..........

thanks but I got my own thang on the come up


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Francis, M to the iz-H phenominal
Gun rest under your vest by the abdominal
Two auto-matos, used to call me fatso
Now you call me Castro, my rap flows
militant, y'all faggots ain't killin' shit
~ Notorious BIG
 

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Re: As I Fade Away
« Reply #7 on: November 14, 2006, 06:35:56 AM »
verty good have you ever thought of sending some of your shit to dre?I can give yoiu the hook if you want it..........

thanks but I got my own thang on the come up


DYNAMIC

so u have some of your shit on record?...would be nice to hear that
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