Wet Panties Part 2

[Sanford - V. President of the Dangerous Crew Movement]

"For he/she has never tried has lost even before the battle has begun,"
Yup, like someone telling a person without legs to run,
Even dumb like winning the lottery and forgetting where you're from,
Hung on comin' up will only lead problems to succumb and left  the changed for undone.
Thats why I'm blunt, this art allows me to hit the smallest of marks,
Cause my poetic thoughts pause significant leaders in a deceiving vault as they come to a screeching halt.
Find my words sharper than darts when my bark cuts through like that of a great white shark,
I don't think its my fault when people read this and are lost for remarks,
When its evident that my heart is the spark that lets you see in the dark.
Part of the formula is being smart and the other being honest,
So yes, I started writing a lot of poetry a few years before college
I tried putting my poem in stanzas using Microsoft Office, but the website would not allow it.
Anyway, I think poetry is a knowledge that can never be solved but may be tried with logic,
Anonymous resolve to endless problems, while maintaining a consistant evolving symbolic project,
But imma leave that alone for now and just speak some about the elegant beauty which you revolve with.
Nirvana, your smile is like the smoothest flowing volcanic fires,
An endless supply of radiant bliss that can be seen from miles.
Shine brighter than a sapphire, A style in which many can desire but only few are luck enough to conspire
Cause only a liar wouldn't admire the beautiful essence you perspire.

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

though the lines are pretty long, it flows really nice.

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

keep it up, dowg

[QuietTruth]

Nice stuff.

 

[Sanford - V. President of the Dangerous Crew Movement]

though the lines are pretty long, it flows really nice.

thanks man.  yea, its more of a poem than like an actual rap...but dont worry, imma have a rap comin soon!  always appreciate the feedback man!   

Nice stuff.

 

appreciate that man.   

[Sparegeez]

There goes another letter to my GF

["THE" MoSav]

"For he/she has never tried has lost even before the battle has begun,"
Yup, like someone telling a person without legs to run,
Even dumb like winning the lottery and forgetting where you're from,
Hung on comin' up will only lead problems to succumb and left  the changed for undone.
Thats why I'm blunt, this art allows me to hit the smallest of marks,
Cause my poetic thoughts pause significant leaders in a deceiving vault as they come to a screeching halt.
Find my words sharper than darts when my bark cuts through like that of a great white shark,
I don't think its my fault when people read this and are lost for remarks,
When its evident that my heart is the spark that lets you see in the dark.
Part of the formula is being smart and the other being honest,
So yes, I started writing a lot of poetry a few years before college
I tried putting my poem in stanzas using Microsoft Office, but the website would not allow it.
Anyway, I think poetry is a knowledge that can never be solved but may be tried with logic,
Anonymous resolve to endless problems, while maintaining a consistant evolving symbolic project,
But imma leave that alone for now and just speak some about the elegant beauty which you revolve with.
Nirvana, your smile is like the smoothest flowing volcanic fires,
An endless supply of radiant bliss that can be seen from miles.
Shine brighter than a sapphire, A style in which many can desire but only few are luck enough to conspire
Cause only a liar wouldn't admire the beautiful essence you perspire.

really nice flow and some mataphors that were placed in the correct spot, not overdone. You ever think about spitting some of the shit you write over beats? Cuz you have some vicious rhymes..

[Sanford - V. President of the Dangerous Crew Movement]

"For he/she has never tried has lost even before the battle has begun,"
Yup, like someone telling a person without legs to run,
Even dumb like winning the lottery and forgetting where you're from,
Hung on comin' up will only lead problems to succumb and left  the changed for undone.
Thats why I'm blunt, this art allows me to hit the smallest of marks,
Cause my poetic thoughts pause significant leaders in a deceiving vault as they come to a screeching halt.
Find my words sharper than darts when my bark cuts through like that of a great white shark,
I don't think its my fault when people read this and are lost for remarks,
When its evident that my heart is the spark that lets you see in the dark.
Part of the formula is being smart and the other being honest,
So yes, I started writing a lot of poetry a few years before college
I tried putting my poem in stanzas using Microsoft Office, but the website would not allow it.
Anyway, I think poetry is a knowledge that can never be solved but may be tried with logic,
Anonymous resolve to endless problems, while maintaining a consistant evolving symbolic project,
But imma leave that alone for now and just speak some about the elegant beauty which you revolve with.
Nirvana, your smile is like the smoothest flowing volcanic fires,
An endless supply of radiant bliss that can be seen from miles.
Shine brighter than a sapphire, A style in which many can desire but only few are luck enough to conspire
Cause only a liar wouldn't admire the beautiful essence you perspire.

really nice flow and some mataphors that were placed in the correct spot, not overdone. You ever think about spitting some of the shit you write over beats? Cuz you have some vicious rhymes..

thanks man.  yea, ive spit this over Games "Hate it or live it" beat.  came out pretty good, however, i still want to work on my speed changing patterns...kinda like how Brotha Lynch was so good at back in the day.

props as always!