Peep this verse i wrote for a Bad-N-Fluenze song

[Sanford - V. President of the Dangerous Crew Movement]

Torcher Chamber - Rappin Ron, Ant Diddly, and Sanford.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/12-torcher-chamber-featuring-street-thugs-mp3.html
i know this should be keystyle, but because this is for a West Coast song, I thought id share it with you guys.  plus, nobody ever go to the keystyle! 

Cat in the hat?(ha ha)
Sanford gots the gat in yo hat,
Ready to attack with some rum and a Rambo strap,
Blast the mac fast, dumpin' chopped heads in the trunk of a Hatchback Cadillac.
Bust out black garbage bags, when wrapping yo family in black leather sacks, so you can remember that,
You fuckin' with niggaz laughin' in masks, comin' sicker than some dead hypochondriacs.
Fuckin' with the Dangerous Crew and will have us react with yo stash of cash in my lap,
As yo momma gets her neck snapped back while her lungs begin to collapse,
Sleeping next to the Muni railroad tracks getting ate up by rats with her head  smashed and detached.
You cant match a nigga being Suckaa Free when we do dirt but still remain so fucken clean,
Leave a bitch with no spleen, washin' our hands before leavin' the scene.
Believe nigga, its that Bay Shit,  but we call it the torcher chamber,
Reframe a stranger with razors till theres no remainders to change thier behavior.
Physcitriys tried to solve me, but its just my hobby,
To have a niggaz head sleepin calmy with no body,
Cause livin' in the Bay is you like bein' a game of monopoly,
You gotta to kill a nigga first before robbin' their property.


Beeeeeeyatch!   


drop your thoughts....if the shit was gabbaage, just go ahead and say it.   

appreciate the feed back!

[eazye]

That shit is straight dope dude, I mean it 

There are a lot of great lines

You cant match a nigga being Suckaa Free when we do dirt but still remain so fucken clean,
Leave a bitch with no spleen, washin' our hands before leavin' the scene.
Believe nigga, its that Bay Shit,  but we call it the torcher chamber,
Reframe a stranger with razors till theres no remainders to change thier behavior

But that's probably the illest.The line with the Cadillac is also a favourite.

Props once again homie.Great ass verse  . I can easily say you ripped that shit apart

[Sanford - V. President of the Dangerous Crew Movement]

That shit is straight dope dude, I mean it 

There are a lot of great lines

You cant match a nigga being Suckaa Free when we do dirt but still remain so fucken clean,
Leave a bitch with no spleen, washin' our hands before leavin' the scene.
Believe nigga, its that Bay Shit,  but we call it the torcher chamber,
Reframe a stranger with razors till theres no remainders to change thier behavior

But that's probably the illest.The line with the Cadillac is also a favourite.

Props once again homie.Great ass verse  . I can easily say you ripped that shit apart

oh man, i really appreciate that dude!  thanks for the insight and feedback, atleaset somebody droppin they comments!   

again man, major props!