Author Topic: wrote this is english... hey, its poetry  (Read 165 times)

Shawn Nutt

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wrote this is english... hey, its poetry
« on: January 16, 2007, 05:40:15 PM »
By any means necessary, my flow is VERTERANary,
I'm one sick puppy, your threats is less than scary.
I'm preparing, wearing camoflague in the tree's,
In a mountain of weed, 20 pounds at least.
At peace, keepin' it real to who deserve it,
Fuckin' up my enemies and the snitches who heard it.
My purpose is quite clear near the years end,
Bendin' rules like "HOT STEAL", that's a crime my friend.
 

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Re: wrote this is english... hey, its poetry
« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2007, 09:34:14 PM »
It ain't bad..to be honest..i think u need more description.  At least you real with what you wrote. doper.
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Re: wrote this is english... hey, its poetry
« Reply #2 on: February 12, 2007, 09:47:05 PM »
By any means necessary, my flow is VERTERANary,
I'm one sick puppy, your threats is less than scary.
I'm preparing, wearing camoflague in the tree's,
In a mountain of weed, 20 pounds at least.
At peace, keepin' it real to who deserve it,
Fuckin' up my enemies and the snitches who heard it.
My purpose is quite clear near the years end,
Bendin' rules like "HOT STEAL", that's a crime my friend.
your one big faggot
 

Shawn Nutt

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Re: wrote this is english... hey, its poetry
« Reply #3 on: February 12, 2007, 09:52:07 PM »
It ain't bad..to be honest..i think u need more description.  At least you real with what you wrote. doper.

ok cool, thanks for the feedback 8)
 

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Re: wrote this is english... hey, its poetry
« Reply #4 on: February 12, 2007, 09:53:11 PM »
homo
 

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Re: wrote this is english... hey, its poetry
« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2007, 02:46:52 PM »
LMAO.


Keep that shit up Shawn, homie.