Dreamz song...

[Assassyn]

Remember this is nothing but constructive criticism.  I thought the song was below average and hear are some reasons why.  The beat from the beginning didn't grab my attention.  Alongside with that, the hook I didn't like because it was used before, and I like originality.  Topicallity wasn't new.  Only thing that I did like was the mastered version.  Keep at it though.