Author Topic: Scattered Thoughts (Read 156 times)

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **on:** January 17, 2008, 04:55:06 PM »

I'm not even underground no more,
I'm six feet under, down dep in the earths core and the center,
It's flaming hot down there
And I'm a resevoir for bad karma,
Fuck that, the whole earths on bad karma,
Since the day we was given brith from mama,
"Your honor" I pledge giulty as fuck,
Lock us up for we let loose,
The whole worlds neck is in a noose,
They say life is full of moments of quiet desperation,
Satan is invadin your station,
And brain waves, this muthafucking maze is never ending,
One mis-step you fade back to the beggining,
Seems like I just keep sayin...
After this, no wait, after this I'll get my life together,
But that day seems like its closer to never,
Guess I will work it all out this lifetime,
But I think I need 5 lifetimes,
Or maybe I will work it out in the space of this rhyme,
Or what happened to the last time I worked it out....
Couple years later I ended up lost in another continent with my foot in my mouth,
My words coming back to haunt me,
And there's no time left for honesty,
So honestly I've obviously had enough but its never ending,
I've evolved 360 degree's of knowledge so now I'm back at the beggining
Completed my cipher of knowledge only to learn that the learning process is never ending,
Constant struggle, anything we have we lose, good times soon pass, I put it down Pac-like,
And tell you that time changes us to stone, then crack pipes,
Life not meetin my expectations, guess I need to lower my expectations to helll and become complacent,
But I can't accept nothing less, the strangeness of the arrangements of my minds mental bench press,
Up, Down, Up, down, my mental fitness is weak,
My past is bleak, my future is right around the corner...
But I been sayin that for years, my lifes been fucked since the OJ murders,
I take that back, cause half of 96 was a good year,
I think its actually the second half that started around the time Dre dropped Aftermath and 2pac got capped after that Tyson match...
Yeah... my shits been fucked up ever since that,
No stability, no tranquility, dogg its killing me,
No creativity, my mind needs to be free,
But I'm always stuck in this or that rut....
I think I gave up around the time Eminem dropped "I just don't give a fuck"
So 99 came and after another year would come to pass,
I realized I was still living, my life wasn't ending, so I might as well doing something worthwhile to add some meaning,
I guess after graduatin I got caught up in being conscious around the time Talib Kweli dropped "Train of Thought"
I thought knowledge and discipline would bring my decline to an end,
But then, well, you heard enough, fuck it, just press replay and let the same record play again and again... the end.

QuietTruth · « **Reply #1 on:** January 17, 2008, 06:20:54 PM »

Quote from: Infinite on January 17, 2008, 04:55:06 PM

My words coming back to haunt me,
And there's no time left for honesty,
So honestly I've obviously had enough but its never ending,
I've evolved 360 degree's of knowledge so now I'm back at the beggining

Life not meetin my expectations, guess I need to lower my expectations to helll and become complacent,

Up, Down, Up, down, my mental fitness is weak,
My past is bleak, my future is right around the corner...
But I been sayin that for years, my lifes been fucked since the OJ murders,
I take that back, cause half of 96 was a good year,
I think its actually the second half that started around the time Dre dropped Aftermath and 2pac got capped after that Tyson match...
Yeah... my shits been fucked up ever since that,
No stability, no tranquility, dogg its killing me,
No creativity, my mind needs to be free,
But I'm always stuck in this or that rut....
I think I gave up around the time Eminem dropped "I just don't give a fuck"

All that shit IS HEAT homie. Damn, you musta honestly poured out your soul in this one. That's the 3rd sick drop you done did nigga. Damnn.

MontrealCity's Most · « **Reply #2 on:** January 17, 2008, 11:00:05 PM »

Id def put that on a record!

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **Reply #3 on:** January 18, 2008, 06:31:45 AM »

Thanks ya'll... I appreciate the feedback, and if u ever have any rhymes you want me to review just send me a personal message with a link and I will check them out...

Peace and respect