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Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« on: May 21, 2008, 11:24:23 AM »
Man hearing this track with zero bass really hurt it...

So i decided to try to add some bass to it... Came out pretty nice i think...  Play the original and then play this and you will see a BIG DIFFERENCE....

Let me know what you guys think:

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2008, 11:34:22 AM »
LOL... I actually started making one too, but got distracted and gave up, if I ever make another one I'll post it up.

It's not that bad, that's pretty much the vibe mine had... Good work!

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2008, 11:40:45 AM »
good shit.. heres my take on it the from the 1st chorus/hook to the end of the track.. everything sounds on point as far as rhythm and timing goes.. i would turn up the velocity on a few notes here and there because it seems like the bass ( i know it was your intention to) but it fades out TREMENDOUSLY so just up it on a few notes a lil

however the first verse is sloppy .. after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note  
the rest of it sounds rushed , velocity sounds off on alot of it  
just fix it player you got the rest down packed  ;)
 

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2008, 11:41:30 AM »
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LOL... I actually started making one too, but got distracted and gave up, if I ever make another one I'll post it up.

It's not that bad, that's pretty much the vibe mine had... Good work!

man this made a big difference for me... i know to those bumpin this track through computer speakers, they probably dont care for this and wont hear a difference...

but man i got some nice subwoofer connected to my computer and it sounds WAYY better with the bass...  Maybe its just me..

man im a burn this on a disc and play it trough a car system see how it sounds...
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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #4 on: May 21, 2008, 11:47:01 AM »
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good shit.. heres my take on it the from the 1st chorus/hook to the end of the track.. everything sounds on point as far as rhythm and timing goes.. i would turn up the velocity on a few notes here and there because it seems like the bass ( i know it was your intention to) but it fades out TREMENDOUSLY so just up it on a few notes a lil

however the first verse is sloppy .. after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note 
the rest of it sounds rushed , velocity sounds off on alot of it 
just fix it player you got the rest down packed  Wink

yeah man thanks for the feedback...  I know i still got to work on it more...but i just did this like in half an hour and posted it up...

Im try to fix it if i can...  got to see what you mean though..  I dont get the second part your talking about. Where you say the 2nd note immediatley sticks out..
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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2008, 12:10:40 PM »
Propz!!!
 

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2008, 12:20:24 PM »
HaHa
Thanks
 

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #7 on: May 21, 2008, 12:52:25 PM »
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good shit.. heres my take on it the from the 1st chorus/hook to the end of the track.. everything sounds on point as far as rhythm and timing goes.. i would turn up the velocity on a few notes here and there because it seems like the bass ( i know it was your intention to) but it fades out TREMENDOUSLY so just up it on a few notes a lil

however the first verse is sloppy .. after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note 
the rest of it sounds rushed , velocity sounds off on alot of it 
just fix it player you got the rest down packed  Wink

yeah man thanks for the feedback...  I know i still got to work on it more...but i just did this like in half an hour and posted it up...

Im try to fix it if i can...  got to see what you mean though..  I dont get the second part your talking about. Where you say the 2nd note immediatley sticks out..


after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note  
^^ raise the bass up on that note in particular not too much though...  around 0.36- 0.37 theres a significant amount of drop in bass enough to where it throws off the track

tight tight doggy you got it though man just knock that shit out i wanna hear it when you get done wit it  :)
 

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #8 on: May 21, 2008, 02:53:37 PM »
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after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note 
^^ raise the bass up on that note in particular not too much though...  around 0.36- 0.37 theres a significant amount of drop in bass enough to where it throws off the track

tight tight doggy you got it though man just knock that shit out i wanna hear it when you get done wit it  Smiley

oh alright...coo

ima try to work on it some more.
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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #9 on: May 21, 2008, 09:20:54 PM »
anyone else feeling this?
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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #10 on: May 21, 2008, 09:23:21 PM »
DOPE WORK BIG G.............
 

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #12 on: May 22, 2008, 04:50:33 AM »
props for your time
 

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #13 on: May 22, 2008, 05:05:23 AM »
yeah sound better

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Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
« Reply #14 on: May 22, 2008, 06:25:02 AM »
hes rapping too much likes hes doing a hip hop weekly, he needs to focus around the aura of the song more, his voice and flow didnt match the beat, akon killed the hook, there will be no video and it wont be a single

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