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Round 1: (W) Jookin vs. (L) Quiet Truth - JOOKIN DISQUALIFIED
TraceOneInfinite:
--- Quote from: Jookin247 on July 16, 2008, 12:41:34 AM ---
Its the 'second coming' like part two in a sex flick
Like ramps on freeways, we'll see you at the exit
Leavin you anorexic, yah weight is diminishin
Mortal Kombat rap, and my fate is to "FINISH HIM!"
Like im rapin the innocent, this 'little pussy is fucked'
Shoven rabbits feet, take a seat man yah 'pushin yah luck'
Perpetratin, bitch please, little fleas a big phony
Only "M.C" I can see, G, is in yah sig homie
Dont ask, dont tell, so gay guys salute
In the closet all yah life, now thats the real "Quiet Truth"
--- End quote ---
Woah! That was sick, homie. You came with the same style as Quiet Truth did, but your metaphors were on a proffesional level, made me suspicious of wether you were bitin... but your best rhyme of all was the one you closed with where you questioned his sexual orientation as the "Quiet Truth"... I'm gonna nominate that in the "Awards" thread for one of the best punches/one liners of the year.
Other highlights were your mortal kombat metaphor and tellin him "the only M.C. I see is in your sig, homie... lol... that was great.
score= 10 points
TraceOneInfinite:
Quiet Truth I'm automatically addin 2 points to your score because you had the disadvantage of spittin first, and he could've responded to your verse but didn't, so I am going to subtract two points from Jookin's score.
Quiet Truth I was really impressed with your metaphors, they have improved a lot. maybe had some more style or multi's (multi-rhymes, multi-syllables) and you might have won, but competing tit for tat with Jookin on metaphors you are going to lose cause this dude was droppin metaphors on a proffesional level.
Quiet Truth- 6 points
Jookin- 8 points
my vote= Jookin
ωεεźγ ғ:
Daaaamnn Jookin gets my vote with the Mariah Carey and final punch line LOL
TraceOneInfinite:
It's official... 3-1 - Jookin Wins!
Tournament Record
Jookin- 1-0
Quiet Truth- 0-1
...on to Round 2 (but there is still hope for Quiet Truth, this may be a double elimination tournament, depending on how Round 1 plays out)
QuietTruth:
Oh shit, I didn't get that M.C line I thought he was talkin' Papoose, LOL, good shit, propz to ya'll for voting.
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