Feedback Please.......

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

By tha way this song is called:


DEDICATED 2 THA HATAS....


It's been on tha Sand Nagga SoundClick Site 4 ages but its good Suga Foot posted it here....


And It might make it 2 tha Sand Nagga/SccitStyle<(?)Compilation....

[AlerG]

nik came as tight as i've heard be4...decent song, i like the beat...tha7th was aight, scitt definately lit the song up, peace.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Wow, I dont really know why people are thinking this is my best work...I have some much doper shit Im keeping to myself till my album drops...LoL

Peace

[Suga Foot]

i got a feeling tha bass it taken from sum old dogg pound track...

Um, I don't think so, it all came from my noggin.

[ROCCY]

Yeah..Ive heard this before..Sccit and Tha7th Both droped Heat on here..The beat was tite and I expected it coming from suga cause he also drops nothing but heat....

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Heres my verse...



Wake up, Wake up
See the hataz wanna hate us cuz we make bucks
Cant fade us, This is called Space Funk
Listen to the bass bump
Hate on me and Rodzilla?
Made to be two cop killaz
How can you not feel us?
Call us the "Suns" cuz we brang straight "Heat"
And we like it the "Harder way (Hardaway)", Funky like Stank Feet
Suga Foot brang the beat
me and Rod slang the heat
So how yall blamin me?
For slayin MCs!
All you do is criticise you aint thinkin twice
I can see it in ya bitter eyes
Like Cardboard, rippin guys
Im far more civilized
And I got far more resepct
So when you get Chin Checked
I select to eject ya head from ya neck
Like an Insect or a car wreck effect
Sick like infection
Rippin hataz my intention
Trippen gets no attention
Listen to perfection
Rappin with my logic
while you yappin with ya nonesense
From the Vally to the projects
Stabing Hataz with sharp objects
Sadly saying that its garbage
So Im badly slayin cockheads
Knockin 'em unconciouse...Its Sccit Causin CARNAGE!

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

Yup and Here's mine:

tha7th & sccit bringin tha heat live from killa cali/ wha
Sccit in tha south, im be in tha north valley/
U know me, tha Bay Area Rida/
Tha Middle Eastsida/ Tha one and only Outsida/
Now this one rite here's dedicated 2 tha hatas/
Tha imitatas/
Tha bitch made individuals ones dat criticize all tha time wit their lies/
Im Sick of u muthafuckas tellin me how im makin wrong choices/
Please shut tha fuck up, and HUSH yur goddamm voices/
U faggots piss me off, so now I gotta take yur ass down with lyrics great like Babylon/
Aint no tellin tha next MC is dat I'm droppin on/
Just sit back and witness my phenomenon/
Ima get rid of u haters wit my evil components/
Like Mike Tyson Im known for knocking tha shit outta my opponents/
U can call me tha Bone Collector/
Opening my enemy's Skulls then fadin em like Hannibal Lector/
I'm leaving bones embarrassed bloody and broken/
I could pimp slap your ass to the curb with one verb so observe my words spoken/
And u know I aint callin yall out on wax, cuz dat aint how I settle my beefs/
If I got a problem wit yur ass, Ill handle man 2 man in tha streets.........

[Suga Foot]

^Now Tell Me Those Verses aren't dope^

[ROCCY]

^Now Tell Me Those Verses aren't dope^

They Suck...























































































JK LOL..THERE BLAZINGGGGGGGGGG

[Hittman]

^Now Tell Me Those Verses aren't dope^

NIKs Verse Wasnt Dope In Text!

[KVB]

NIKs Verse Wasnt Dope In Text!

damn right... his performance on the mic was better

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

NIKs Verse Wasnt Dope In Text!

Yup, tru dat......But It's how u deliever it on audio.......Cause Obviously It aint Keystyle so it wont look good when u post it.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Exactly, you keystylers dont understand the difference between Audio verses and Keystyle verses...

Keystyle verses = Longer bars, more punch lines...

Audio Verses = Shorter bars Rhyme more, stays on topic...

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Tell me this isnt dope...(Its not a keystyle type rhyme yall are used too, its an audio rhyme, that a pro rapper would use)

I got far more resepct
So when you get Chin Checked
I select to eject ya head from ya neck
Like an Insect or a car wreck effect
Sick like infection
Rippin' hataz my intention
Trippin' gets no attention
Listen to perfection
Rapping with my logic
while you yapping with ya nonesense
From the Vally to the projects
Stabing Hataz with sharp objects
Sadly saying that its garbage
So Im badly slayin cockheads
Knockin 'em unconciouse...Its Sccit Causin CARNAGE!



and if your looking for metforz/similes/punchlines...



Call us the "Suns" cuz we brang straight~"Heat"/
And we like it the "Harder way (Hardaway)", Funky like Stank~Feet...


I hope yall got that...