(Rate It Plz)

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

Yo, When Ya Were Born The Doctor "Slapped-Your-Mother"
I Punch Like A Pneumatic Drill  Just "Tapped-Your-Brother"  

Sit ~Down~ - You Make The Place Look ~Inoperative~
My Rhymes So ~Significant~ I'm The ~Operative~  

So Small Like The Little Man On Top Of A "Wedding-Cake"

MC(Scratch)MC Menace

You Need To Awake Cuz Ya Nothin' But A "Spreading-Fake"

There Is More ~Meat~ On A Vegetarians Toothpick Than On Ya ~Cock~
This ~Rap~ Causin' You To Have A Hard ~Knock~

MuthaFucka, Act Your Age And Not Ya "Dick-Size"
Even Senseless People Cud Figure Out This "Pricks-Disguise"  

MC(Scratch)MC Menace

Peace Ya'll....

[M Dogg™]

Simple hard rhymes. A nice try. Out of everything, I give it a 7.5 outa 10, about average.

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

Thanks M-Dogg, Peace...

[da_notorious_mack]

Simple hard rhymes. A nice try. Out of everything, I give it a 7.5 outa 10, about average.

See,even the competition realize u got skills.Nice Ryme I d give it 8 outta 10

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

Thanks For The Feed Back...

More Wud Be Nice....Cud You Tell Me Were I Cud Improve Aswell Plz...Thanks

Peace..

[Reef]

Some cool punches.. Simple but hard.. Good work..

peace