It's June 03, 2024, 10:02:22 AM
^DAMN, ROUGH CROWD.....I thought it was interesting man, some of the odd bars seemed a little too long though, you may need to re-phrase some stuff if you ever decide to record this....but, it does read like a remake of a Common verse, which, if you were going for that, then you accomplished it well.If not, then do something to seperate yourself from the originator of the concept.... other than that, I enjoyed reading it!