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an untitled drop....give feedback pleez...
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Natural_Instinc
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an untitled drop....give feedback pleez...
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June 14, 2002, 11:20:34 AM »
sittin riddled at my ma's crib...fueled..bedroom thinkin~ l shrinkin, smolderin the mood, cruel livid/
flip it vivid...freshen time with a peppermint mind~ spillin v.class moves as a letterman a rhyme/
pressin fine, break the strain...gainin off the line engaged~ pavin way into motion off the stillness primed in fate/
if its great, catch me poppin...gotta second? watch me rock it!~ try to question what im spittin -n you'll only lose ya noggin/
shoot the honest, and i plummit..speakin easy underground~ peakin everest, climbin mountains jus to get to the clouds/
call me proud, kick the confidence...broke -n still leechin~ a scholar a the rythem but a kid who hates readin /
follow reason..yes a student...unemployed..conscious fuedin~
clenchin hard on the real and gettin chills from the music/
middle class rooted, seperate, combine....flop the minimal~
twinin..call it stuck ...jus a knock away from pitiful/
no ridicule untypical....obliterated literal ~ poundin past the prescense to escape -n change the visual/
a rigid pull lingering inside the cracks im quakin~ drivin charged off the grind, when all i really want is paticence/
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PakiGangsta
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Re: an untitled drop....give feedback pleez...
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June 14, 2002, 12:54:00 PM »
that was really very nice...good use of multis...and it was really very good......
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ChildOfMuthaNature
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Nature's Child
Re: an untitled drop....give feedback pleez...
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June 15, 2002, 01:12:25 AM »
nice rhyme but hard to decipher
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'Illicit'
Muthafuckin' Don!
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i rarely smoke... but i love mickey d's
Re: an untitled drop....give feedback pleez...
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June 15, 2002, 12:38:42 PM »
yeh I agree, create a line order so its easier to follow.
but dope piece dawg.
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I once walked into a brothel with a honeycomb and a jackass...
"Perhaps the most valuable result of all education is the ability to make yourself do the thing you have to do, when it ought to be done, whether you like it or not."
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Re: an untitled drop....give feedback pleez...
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June 15, 2002, 11:16:09 PM »
That shit was wack!
Brush up on them lyrical skillz or U'll get ripped
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'Illicit'
Muthafuckin' Don!
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i rarely smoke... but i love mickey d's
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June 16, 2002, 06:25:42 AM »
at least he tryin man, he wanted feedback, that wasnt wack, it may not have been good but def not wack compared to some shit bein dropped on this board.
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I once walked into a brothel with a honeycomb and a jackass...
"Perhaps the most valuable result of all education is the ability to make yourself do the thing you have to do, when it ought to be done, whether you like it or not."
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