Yo SMOOTH......

[.:R-E-L:.]

im callin u out....


max of 20 bars

since people r lazy 3-0(KO) 4 Votes= Victory

start postin ASAP

[Smooth]

yo this is my first battle... i don't usually write many rhymes but since this foo called me out... i had to reply....



Yo R-E-L, ya steppin up but ya fell/
to your demise, i despise/
fools like you, and your crew, i'll blast through, oh so your new?/
wanna make yourself a name, steppin to smooth tryin to gain some fame?, use your brain/
before you come and battle me, ya stepped up now there's gotta be a tragedy/
you want beef?, I take that shit as flattery/
lyrical wit, gun clips/
is what im about, smashin on any fool that wanna call me out/
yo I got rhymes you can't see, break ya down mentally/
my lyrics will kill ya, cause im on a killin spree/
yo this my first battle I can't believe that I won/
so confident, don't need no gun, I just use my tongue/
ya best run, cause this battle is done/

[ROCCY]

^^ ILL PEACE..

[.:R-E-L:.]

the battle is done?? now its time 4 me 2 have some fun...

R-E-L, spittin, as bad as a villain, u mad cuz im chillen and how im livin?//
Its time fo u ta learn a lyrical lesson, u have to much tension//
And no lyrical-suspension//
Unlike science, i act and u cant react, and thats a fact-like my defiance//
Stop reminicing and start listening//
Ur weak, and u leak like a Hoe's beak//
U go, drip drop, and ur albums, flip flop, cuz im on top//
And ull never be, cuz knowledge is my key and my conscience is free//
R-E-L, be leavin u dead in the dust, ull b sayin "enough" cuz im so tough, like Chashis Clay//
And he is saying u betta run away, cuz u so gay, and as a store- we put u on lay away//
U gotta bring it as hard as a rock, without suckin the cock//
Thats wat u gotta do to get tha game on lock//
"Knock-Knock"- the Grim Reapa's at tha door, ready to bust yo ass on the floor, jus like a daily chore//
except its hardcore//




UPPIN FO VOTES, YALL!!!!!!

[.:R-E-L:.]

Votes???

[da_notorious_mack]

im gunna go wit smooth,i jus felt his mo

can sum1 vote on my battlez now plz

[Hittman]

Smooth, Please Go Vote On Two Battles. I Will Unlock This Match Once That Has Been Done.

I Know Other People Have Been Doing It But This Is Just The One I Caught.

[.:R-E-L:.]

y does it take soooooooo long  get votes???


[size=20]VOTES[/size][/glow]

[Smooth]

Uppin for votes!

[Doggystylin]

i gotta go with smooth, he flowed better and his shit just sounded tighter

['Illicit']

well R-E-L started off tight, I liked that but Smooth was overall more consistent and flowed better.

[Smooth]

3-0 me homie... KO

[bLaDe]

3-0 me homie... KO

haha congrats homie, first battle, and u won, hope u keep spittin, pz

 -{bLaDe}

[ROCCY]

haha congrats homie, first battle, and u won, hope u keep spittin, pz

 -{bLaDe}

[Vigilante]

both werent tha greatest, but i vote for rel cause he has some better diction, but yall should use more diction better!  :-/


[size=20]vote - rel[/size][/glow]