da n.mack vs crescendo

[da_notorious_mack]

i aint takin no chances wit dis battle,my shit gunna b ill ,crescendo put da spit u put on da challenge pg on here den ill hit u bak 1st 2 5 3 vote ko

[da_notorious_mack]

yo dis iz da battle 1st 2 5 3-0 ko


CRESCENDO
To tha ends of time//
Lookin at me, like i commited a crime//
Always findin words that match an rhyme//
Hellbound to tha tenth degree//
Tha only emcee walkin out alive is me//
Lyrically sniper, all those who keep their distance//
Comin at you with 110% and no resistance//
Explode with venomous rhymes//
Sound better than 4-5 wind chimes//
Ima fuck wid ya head, till your halucinatin//
You pull a gun to ya head//
Spreadin a lyrical disease to give ya'll excuses//
So that when you loose to me, the excuse, you've used it//
Finally comin to an end//
Till tha ends of time//

MACK
Lookee here another nutrider like Amad on Jordan//  
This battle's done faster than flash gordon//  
Fuck wit my rhymes? hope your fingers rapped in condoms//  
*ooooh he bombed em**then he stomped em*//  
this kid is so violent *maybe we should ban this*//  
*nah hold on i wanna see Crescendo kiss the canvas*//  
You cant stand this, ive been accused of leavin "verbal abused"//  
thats not all, hes been shattered and bruised//  
To beat me, i hope you got a miracle//  
mental? physical? hell nah, lyrical//  
my rhymes are empirical, in simplest form//  
like a fuckin storm my lyrics strike light lightnin//  
it must be frightnin, i tried to open up your sight an//  
you got two glass eyes no wonder its you who died//  
*this is Crescendo reportin on how my casket looks from the inside//  
too late i buried him six feet deeper//  
this is Notorious A.K.A the Grim Reaper//  




DA NOTORIOUS

[ToNe1904]

Notorious u took this one. Had a better flowing verse and more directly attacked cresendo. good shit yall

vote=Mack

['Illicit']

yeh I agree wit ToNe on this one

vote: Mack

[Dug-e]

K dawgs, So what happens now, i sorta got all confuzzled wid da rules..?


Peace -- Crescendo

[.:R-E-L:.]

Notorious u took this one. Had a better flowing verse and more directly attacked cresendo. good shit yall

vote=Mack

[Sir Hambone]

To The victor

=Mack

Nice Lingo, with the Words.....tight..

[Vigilante]

RATINGS ON EACH


CRESCENDO
To tha ends of time//
Lookin at me, like i commited a crime//
Always findin words that match an rhyme//

umm, not very strong, very weak actually, its also '3' lines that end wi same rhyme it has ta be 2 or 4

Hellbound to tha tenth degree//
Tha only emcee walkin out alive is me//
Lyrically sniper, all those who keep their distance//
Comin at you with 110% and no resistance//
Explode with venomous rhymes//
Sound better than 4-5 wind chimes//
Ima fuck wid ya head, till your halucinatin//
You pull a gun to ya head//
Spreadin a lyrical disease to give ya'll excuses//
So that when you loose to me, the excuse, you've used it//
Finally comin to an end//
Till tha ends of time//

No offense, but ya need to use more diction and beter wording, too simple

MACK
Lookee here another nutrider like Amad on Jordan//  
This battle's done faster than flash gordon//  

nice....decent

Fuck wit my rhymes? hope your fingers rapped in condoms//  
*ooooh he bombed em**then he stomped em*//  

nice wordplay on 1st line, ya fucked it up on tha 2nd line

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Not very impressed with da notorios on this battle, but he did come stronger....vote - mack

also CRESCENDO , would ya like to battle??

[Miss NWA Whoorider]

cresendo=4.3

cresendo did a nice Job on his word skills just have to polish them a little bit more baby


mack=4.4
I have to give this one to Mack he came faster and harder then Cresendo did

[Dug-e]

Ok K-S Criminal i will battle ya... I figured that the only reason that you wanna battle me is coz im a newbie and i am not very good at freestylin, so you could tell your pals that you beat another rookie... Well i dont care i will battle ya..!

You call the first shots, make it in a new post tho..!

Peace -- Dug-e (a.k.a Crescendo)