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Entreri117

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Sumthin
« on: April 21, 2002, 12:45:55 PM »
I'm comin in with myself bein sadistic and balistick/
I'm so explicit cuz these are my fuckin characteristics//
I'm flippin you bastards over with my rhymin spatulas/
When I beat you in battle, it won't be mircaulous//
I'm untouchable with my harmony and with my rhythm/
Don't matter if you got a laser or a scope, you'll always be missin//
I'm so big and strong, I'll rip you apart like Godzilla/
I'm so smooth I'll lyrically rip you apart cuz noones illa//
I can knock you out or roundhouse kick you like a samurai/
Or I can bust in ya house and leave it in ruin with my evil eye//
Cuttin you up into meager tiny pieces...put you in 50 different jars/
I'm usin swords with no special "Force" . . .this ain't fuckin Star Wars//
Whether I'm a Jedi Knight, or a plain thugged out child/
I'm so wild that I'll drop you in Egypt right in the Nile//
You can file for a restraining order, but I'll just come back/
With two plastic gats, and a stuffed tiger in my right hand//
You can't get rid of me no matter what you do/
In your head I'll keep yellin "NEW SHIT!" just like DJ Clue//
If you have no spectacular talent or special capability, get out of my way/
I'm comin through in a Cadillac Escalade that I stole yesterday//
I don't know what the fuck I'm speakin, so I'll go creepin/
But watch out for the backdraft when the match lights while you sleepin//

Please give me some feedback on this piece...
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Re: Sumthin
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2002, 01:22:54 PM »
Comeon you bastards...don't sleep on my shit!  >:(
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Re: Sumthin
« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2002, 12:27:37 PM »
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Re: Sumthin
« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2002, 12:32:16 PM »
LOL.... it's all love. That was very impressive. But you've been dropping hot shit as of late, so good shit dogg. Keep them coming, and you might get a big break.
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Re: Sumthin
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2002, 12:53:41 PM »
Yo M Dogg

Thanx for the nice comments and for even replying.  You always drop nice shit, and you are damn tight...keep it real homie!
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Re: Sumthin
« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2002, 02:07:12 PM »
yep impressive, I agree.

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Whether I'm a Jedi Knight, or a plain thugged out child/
I'm so wild that I'll drop you in Egypt right in the Nile//


^this was dope,  but the whole rhyme didnt really lack anything man,  nice piece imo

salaam.
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Re: Sumthin
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2002, 02:23:59 PM »
Thanks Illicit....I appreciate the feedback
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