Jamal420 Im calling u out

[ROCCY]

Yo jamal sup big homie? Well U wanted me to call u out before maddskilzz called me out so Im battlling u first We got t'l Sunday.. 15-21 Bars first up to 4 wins.

PEACE

[Jamal420]

k....i'ma post mine sunday night when i get home from work....i'll prolly post at like 10 p.m.....

[ROCCY]

Alright tite homie..I finshed mine already..I'l post it tommarow..I still needa fix sum parts up


PEACE

[ROCCY]

Sup homie Alright this is my Shit I did it fast last night so it sucks..PEACE and remember only honest votes..everyone can vote..


My rhymes Are meaner then the Devil/ You aint me u in a Diffrent Level/ Im up u down/ After this, u will Frown/ I'l make u look like a Clown/ After all the laughs at u/ you will turn blue/ Roccy aint Done Bombing/ I'm about to be Stomping/ And My rhymes are Just Pumping/ Even More Harder then they are/ And Im Spitting Faster then a Nas~car/ And when my shit hits It hurts more then a Crow~bar/ One hit to your head/ And you'l be dead/ Me and u are Cool/ But dont get to excited Fool/ Cause I aint stopin from beatin you/ Beat u on the floor 1,2/ This is a 15 minute Rhyme I wrote/ And Next time Remember To choose A Diffrent Route/

[Jamal420]

aiight....ROCCY...u know i found out last nite that u called me out, and i was gonna write mine tomorrow at work, but I decided to post mine now....this is my first time y'all so if u wanna tell me things to improve on lemme know...plus I already know this is sum SIMPLISTIC shit but I'll get there....here it is.....


did you just call me out you fat muthafucca/
everyone knows you're NIK's personal dick-succa/
think I don't know he writes your rhymes?/
while u suck off his friends waitin in lines/
who the fuck do u think u "R"?/
i jus started and u already beat by far/
james who? I ain't never hearda-ya/
i can see the future I'm about to murda-ya/
all u ever hear is "dogg u improvin"/
this is my first time and now u in ruin/
come on homie, u know the situation/
fuck wit me, experience decapitation/
your dick deflated, your titties inflated/
i took my eyes off my food, in 1 second u ate it/
everythin u eat u consider just anutha ounce/
now u wonder why u weigh 450 pounds/
i see u sittin wit a dictionary in yo hand/
tryin to figure what i'm sayin but u cant/
look dogg, this wasn't meant to be a diss/
jus u throwin a punch, but yo it's a MISS/


me n ROCCY agreed that votes from: NIK,REL, and DatMuthaphuccaDan couldn't vote....no beef y'all jus to make it fair

[ROCCY]

HaHaHAAHAHAH Had me Cracking Up big homie..LMAO..Well U know I dont weigh 450..but tryin to be funny so its tite..and I didnt take anythin from the personally cause ur the homie and we coo..but u did have sum dumb shit like the 450 and some other shit I have dumb shit too.  

But its all good..



PEACE

[infinite59]

vote= Jamal

reason: More intense, believable, and personal.  Roccy was spittin some ill metaphors and punchlines, but it seems Jamal had some shit he's been waitin to drop on Roccy for the longest.  Tight battle.  Peace.

[techniec]

well, i really dont want to vote on this cuz youre both my boyz, but without criticism u cant improve

roccy, youre shit flowed real nice, i could picture u spittin that in my head, but you need to improve your vocab, i though your rhymes were real simple at times

jamal, you kinda strayed off topic too, you didnt really coe at him hard, but your vocab was nice and it wasa dope overall spit

vote - jamal
peace to the both of u

[Jamal420]

lol...ya u know we coo....but that aint all that bad for 1st time huh ?...

[DeaDSouLjaH]

jamal's verse , overall was the tighter verse.. better vocab and punches... and roccy ...u're verse consisted of very basic, simple ryme combinations .. u shud ave made an effort to add a bit more omplexity ...  i thought u shud ave spent some more time on yo verse.. .. wasnt anything like wat u spat against madskillz

vote=JAMAL

[Maestro Minded]

ima give my vote to Jamal, cuz his rhymes were more directed and slightly better written .. he had sum dope punches like

"all u ever hear is "dogg u improvin"
"i took my eyes off my food, in 1 second u ate it"

even though Roccy also had nice ones like

"And Im Spitting Faster then a Nas~car"

he still was alitle under Jamal's level on this one

[Jamal420]

hell ya....1-0....i should retire wit a perfect record.....lol.....but roccy good battle....ur the one that told me to try and battle....thanx

[ROCCY]

I think this was the worst battle in my life for some reason the loss I got from Maxi I felt good about..and I liked loosin cause It gave me a sign about something but this was the worst battle I can ever think of. and It isnt cause its your first time and just probelly the shit u said I dunno ..It was all bullshit..To me I hated this battle.....Im never gonna battle Again unless something nice happens..
Im Out of Keystyling

PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jamal420]

how sick is that....i sent that foo into exile....lol

[techniec]

you ended the homies career man, lol

bechara, poor guy

yo roccy dont give up man, keep at it, holla at me if u want help or sumthing, giving up is the last thing u should do!