~:~Purpose of L I F E~:~...(New shit)

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

heres the second verse to this song im doing titled "Purpose of Life." I want opinions...Thanks




Life is underestimated, underated, above and elevated
Some debate it but I'm the fuckin greatest
Undisputed, Veiwed as unsuited more troubled than abused kids
Humble, makin music
Usin excuses to do it for a career I'm foolish
A confused kid
I'm Crazy and Gruesom
The ladys seduce 'em
They may be illusions
I pra for solutions
There aint no conclusion
I'm just a stupid young child
In the eyes of the US, I'm a blooper gone wild
I'm despised, got here through sex
The thing where oppisite genders
make love the guy bends her
enters his dick in the center
withoit sex there is no inventor
But STILL IT GETS CENSORED
How fucked up is the world nowadays?
Slit wrists, this bitch got me down and crazed
I found a place where they frown at my ways
Livin here is like runnin around in a maze
I cant find a purpose, why am I here?
To the world I'm a tourist, I'm crying in tears
Im dying of fear, my pride is unclear
Life's based on Sex, Drugs, Marrige, Divorce
I'm so desprate I'd wed sluts and marry them whores
I'm scared and I'm bored
A casket my family can barely afford
Just burry my corpse
Are we made out of money is that why we live?
For a green peice of paper, can i buy hapiness?
Nah, there aint no point of existince
The world will one day be gone, so we wont make a difference...

[Instant_Killa]

i share some of the same thoughts conincidently....

nice shit

Peace

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

any feedback?

[MidnightPills]

any feedback?

Nope...... well nothing you want to hear anyways!!  

[bLaDe]

 its gud man, sum lines are ill and deep....

 -{bLaDe}

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

Nope...... well nothing you want to hear anyways!!  

I dont need feedback from a 800 Pound Lesbian...

[bLaDe]

I dont need feedback from a 800 Pound Lesbian...

*rolling on the floor*


 -{bLaDe}