YoungFame tha Godson part1

[YoungFame]

Sometimes I'm like fuck my physical/ because my spiritual and lyrical is more critical/ I'm a miracle/ born from the earth/ created in the image of the almighty/ your just like me/ decietful greedy and needful/ you dont need to be haters/ our worth is much greater/ thats why he died for us/ tears descend from the heavens/ you call it rain/tear drops of pain/ he cried for us/ never lie to us/ he's the  truth/ purity/ serenity/ immuntiy/ community/ but we abuse the privelege/ he gave us the choice to live this/life/ we could have chosen the wrong from the right path/ but instead we chose wrong/ but we must move on/ remain strong as a people/ dont let the lies decieve you/ that'll be leathel/ like weaponry/ the evil in me is sweatin me/ but I wont let it get the best of me/ god son is how I was born/ the son of god has my back when the dark days are testin me and stressin me/ but only by his glory and grace that I'm alive today is god blessin me.

Godson tha Prophet aka Youngfame tha Gift

[MsWestCoast]

i luv ya honey  

['Illicit']

not bad,  but try setting up the lines  like:  
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its better to overlook that way.

[Vigilante]

nice, i gotta battle ya