~~CIVIL WAR II: DEADSOULJAH vs ILLICIT~~

[DeaDSouLjaH]

hey illicit, dont take this personal..jus thought i'd get some practise..

rules:
10-15 barz
3-0 K.O
first one to 4 wins

and anyone can vote.. but pls explain your votes

[DeaDSouLjaH]

....IT HAS BEGUN....
this is civil war part TWO, but this ryme was far too long OVERDUE/
bein in da same CREW, still dont change my tendencies to slice THROUGH YOU/
i'm "licensed to KILL", u're just another victim of my far more superior SKILL, this ryme is your poison PILL/
this ryme gonna bring everythin to a stand STILL, illicit get your pen and start writin your WILL/
callin out ILLICIT, this battle i SUBMIT, is a lesson to teach u how to SPIT/
this ryme truly EXPLICIT, as i TRANSMIT lyrical shockwaves forcin u to QUIT/
a whole new dimension to da game i INTRODUCE, i'm da ryme ZEUS, tightenin this NOOSE/
"haha", u gonna go file a case against me in "da court of ryme" for lyrical ABUSE??/
that pic in your profile is KURUPT, bur your arrangement of lines imma DISRUPT/
i'm like a dormant volcano abt to ERUPT, all your battles i have to INTERRUPT/
this is our first confrontation , these words i spit hittin at u with max ACCELERATION/
breakin your very FOUNDATION, all da lines u spit are gonna be an act of DESPERATION/

...I REST MY CASE...

[DeaDSouLjaH]

^^bump^^
illcit..where are u ?

[DeaDSouLjaH]

....IT HAS BEGUN....

that pic in your profile is KURUPT, bur your arrangement of lines imma DISRUPT/
i'm like a dormant volcano abt to ERUPT, all your battles i have to INTERRUPT/

...I REST MY CASE...

umm...that bur was meant to "but"...jus thought i'd make da correction...thanx

['Illicit']

im sorry man.... i had some troubles in school i had to get fixed.

quick spittin these furious lyrics givin deadsoulja an ass whippin/
I'll lower my level, spit at medium treble but still beat this fool who be trippin/
i got a petition signed by my cohorts, wantin you out of da game/
causin losses on our behalf, so quit shoutin out mah name/
in your raps jus to sound like ya diss me, lines gettin read like palmistry/
while i wear gloves u cant see a lie that leaves my mouth as i speak/
persuade ya mind to commit suicide, kill ya families only true pride/
dont give a fuck if u were down, deadsoulja drowned from my flowing tides/
got no heart to be sufficient, ineligable to be Melanin reppin/
had the guts to call Illicit out, young buck didnt consider where he was steppin/
i neglect you like a newbie wantin to give dick to a groupie/
keystyle fame fucked up your head, aint no emcee alive that can do-me/
spittin damage times 3, words of wisdom too tough to make brains click/
points clear, next time watch out, before your ego outgrows ya dick/
cuz being in Melanin dont mean flippin burgers and spittin easy shit/

peace  

no beef lol

[NoT]

Damn... that was a tight battle and it was really close but I thought that although DeaDSouLjaH came harder, Illicit had a better overall verse. Tight shit by ya both, homies.

VOTE = Illicit

[DeaDSouLjaH]

thanx for votin NOT..

[Hittman]

Vote - Illicit

[DeaDSouLjaH]

thanx for votin LOGIC
2-0 down

[DeaDSouLjaH]

hey LOGIC..btw can u pls explain ur vote..

[KVB]

Like NoT said, Illicit's rhyme flowed better throughout, but impressive rhymes from both of you Melanin homies.
DeadSouljah - your punchlines were seriously ill. Keep that shit up.

Vote - Illicit

['Illicit']

hmm 3-0  or do you wanna revoke Logic's vote until he explains it?  im cool with whatever u decide homie.

[Hittman]

Damn... that was a tight battle and it was really close but I thought that although DeaDSouLjaH came harder, Illicit had a better overall verse. Tight shit by ya both, homies.

VOTE = Illicit

Thats Exactly What I Would Of Said.

The 2 Bars I Was Most Feeling From Cee Ride Were:

persuade ya mind to commit suicide, kill ya families only true pride/
dont give a fuck if u were down, deadsoulja drowned from my flowing tides/

[DeaDSouLjaH]

nice battle illciit 3-0  K.O