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HBKid_Jr:
ight have been k.o'ed in each of my last 4-6 battles,  i dont mind losin but when im gettin K.O'ed it gets real discourging,  tha only vote i got was sympathy vote.  For tha people that  actually read my rhymes what should i do to improve in order to receive votes an by tha way in my battle against tone jus give him tha KO cuz he deserved it

bLaDe:
nah man u tight, keep spittin, challange ppl on your level, analyze ure rhymes, and the votes against you, and try to improve upon that,  like expand more in your barz, add more shit to describe what your trying to say numsayin.  Holla at a few rhymers on AIM, u hardly come online, thaz wht i did, i talked to gud rhymers, who helped me improve, even if you lose, dont get discouraged, try learning from your mistakes, and improving upon what u lack, peace

 -{bLaDe}

Doggystylin:

--- Quote ---nah man u tight, keep spittin, challange ppl on your level, analyze ure rhymes, and the votes against you, and try to improve upon that,  like expand more in your barz, add more shit to describe what your trying to say numsayin.  Holla at a few rhymers on AIM, u hardly come online, thaz wht i did, i talked to gud rhymers, who helped me improve, even if you lose, dont get discouraged, try learning from your mistakes, and improving upon what u lack, peace

 -{bLaDe}
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he talked to me ;)

ToNe1904:

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he talked to me ;)
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he said "good" rhymers lol

jus keep at it Tom. Find a style that suits u best, n jus work on it. N try to be as creative as possible. Yur gettin better by tha day, jus keep expanding different aspects of yur rhyming. Metaphors, Multis....things like that. Rememba, so many people rhyme on here...that a simple "suck my dick" wont win anything, but if u bring it about in a creative way like:

"Blade "suckz" and tries to spit "sick-shit", givin head while my dick shot crabs thru his trick-lips" LOL

bLaDe:
lol see, there r homo rhymers on the board too ^^

 -{bLaDe}

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