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NollA_HollA_Boy

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the first
« on: February 03, 2002, 03:33:56 AM »
Im the new guy
I ain't said much yet
but soon I will
after I get use to this
you can call me a newbie
but thats aight to me
cause I'm going to earn my way up
and get respect from u MC's

I'm tellin all u this
you aint seen nuttin like me
but soon all y'all will get to know me
and u will be like damn he's crazy
all the women will be like how did u get to be like this baby?
I would explain to them
that my damn ex girlfriend
pissed me off
enough said
she's already out of my head
and thats the end
i gots ta go for now
but when i get back
I'm gunna make you jump up and down


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Re: the first
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2002, 08:51:46 AM »
not bad for a freestyle but overall its corny and has no message,  but yeh, the rhymes aint bad.  

keep it up
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NollA_HollA_Boy

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Re: the first
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2002, 11:20:12 AM »
well thats just like my opening, my introductions, its really not ment to diss nobody or anything, just saying that I arrived.
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Re: the first
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2002, 11:48:26 AM »
the red text hurts my eyez so i didnt read it....blah!

but welcome
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NollA_HollA_Boy

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Re: the first
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2002, 12:05:41 PM »
I fixed it, its black now...sorry about dat, i thought red looked pretty good with the picture i have.
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Re: the first
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2002, 12:05:57 PM »
ya the red was kinda bright  ::)

but it was a cool rhyme for the first keep tryin.....
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Re: the first
« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2002, 12:01:52 AM »
Kepp it goin' you'll go better next time: We must battle some day! Peace!
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