Author Topic: My 3rd Rhyme Ever.. (Read 245 times)

ROCCY · « **on:** January 12, 2002, 07:48:07 PM »

hey hey..ya'l know I dont write but I just wanted to write in classroom since I was really board...! and finished my work and if udidnt know me blade and min0rity are makin a song hopy fully blade will be in it..tell me what u think about it honestly 1-10 scale it..I know it sucks..

Yeaaa the homie blade/dont hate/my dick be pointier then a razorblade/and i'l play yo girl friend like she was my maid/oops she just got played/im guessin this was her first time getting laid/but she was drinking my cum like it was gatorade/make my cum blast in her face like it was a wave/soon she'l be my slave/on the ocean she be rubbin my dick with lotion/she was rubbin it so slow it felt like in was in slow motion/

BL7 · « **Reply #1 on:** January 12, 2002, 07:53:11 PM »

Even though it was very short, it still had some funny lines.

''Yeaaa the homie blade/dont hate/my dick be pointier then a razorblade/''

Sub-Z · « **Reply #2 on:** January 12, 2002, 09:33:58 PM »

honestly ,the only line i liked was "she was drinking my cum like it was gatorade" lmao

bLaDe · « **Reply #3 on:** January 12, 2002, 11:33:33 PM »

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honestly ,the only line i liked was "she was drinking my cum like it was gatorade" lmao

Lmao yeah

and roccy, i dunno if i'll be on the song, u know i sucked in rappin da otha day

-{bLaDe}

'Illicit' · « **Reply #4 on:** January 13, 2002, 12:32:28 AM »

come on blade, stop trippin, u beat maxi jus now, u definately dont suck! if you suck on the mic, jus practice, u keep bitchin bout my recordings so get ya ass up n hurr up yaself n do sumthin lol

peace

ROCCY · « **Reply #5 on:** January 13, 2002, 09:18:49 AM »

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Lmao yeah

and roccy, i dunno if i'll be on the song, u know i sucked in rappin da otha day

-{bLaDe}

yo blade..wtf are u talking about...? I suck but look at me I rap..and plsu u werent bad..u just randomly wrote a line and said it lol..with out practice sooo dont say you suck.. and u where really nerves lol..

and about the gatorade part yah..everybody liked it in school lol...nik said thats the only part in the rhyme thats tite lol..