a keystyle give me feedbacc

[snapp]

my name is snapp/
i got my gak/
it aint where u frum is where u at/
im frum da mac streetwise my klik/
and aint nan motherfuccer gone fucc wit dis/
i ride slow,i die fa folk,igot to go,im out da door/
i get da box(chevy),den i hit da lock,and if i hit da switch den dat ass a dropp/
first i get da bitch,den hit da bitch,den swicth da bitch,den dish da bitch/
den hit da front,den hit da blunt,den see how my 450 run/
it aint about da b's or about da c's its about da gees who about da keys/
if u aint about nun of dat den u got to leave/

['Illicit']

yeah well from an intelligent point of view, u need practice, but i like the gangsta shit myself lol  n u got it.  keep it up

peace

[TimeLock]

Cees up homeboy nice ish keep spittin

[ToNe1904]

Cees up homeboy nice ish keep spittin

C'z kiss tha ground that B'z smashin 'round/
We G'z mashin down, S.D.'z blastin clownz/
Neva tru'd up, jus Ru'd up/
Yah blued up frum tha shoez up?/
Flu'd up, throw yah CKrew up/
N whatcha rip be shoot-up/

['Illicit']

in countray languge dat means the ol' crips are som' ol' raggedy pack of hillbillies the ol' raggedy blood's cant stand.
becus the ol' bloods are wearin these red boots n ride these red pick-up trucks play this ol' bouncin hiphop music the youngens nowadays seem to luv so much. while the crips be wearn blue boots n ride blue chevrolets.  the youth nowadays make me think of how simple life used to be when i was a youngen back in the day.   i reckon i be goin out in the woods uhgin.   bye patnas!

peace