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How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« on: December 30, 2001, 02:28:43 AM »
Hello everyone, i have noticed many of you homies always write mean stuff....dont worry, today homie bLaDe will teach you how:

Example from deep discussiion me and homie CeeRide had:

paradox203: hey ceeride
CeeRide1984: hey paradox
paradox203: get me honey from the  :P beehive  :D

^ notice, the nice greeting between two rhymers ^

so this small greeting has shown us the first example:
"Hey homie CeeRide!/
get me honey from the bee hive  :D "

Now my friends, first rule i nwriting nice rhymes:
THEY HAVE TO BE NICE!

now unfortunatly homie CeeRide did not understand this concept.  So he replyed with:

"ceeride gonna give u a free-ride to hell"

Umm as you can see, that wasn't very nice and didn't rhyme propaly

Which brings us to our next rule:
ALWAYS PUT A SMILEY IN YOUR NICE RHYME!

FOR eg:

paradox203:  hey big homie blade!/home u get laid!(insert smiley)
i hope u get big pay/damn homie u make my day!(insert smiley)

as you can see, i've clearly explaned it to him...but he still has yet to learn

his response:

the homie blade is a trip/ he deserves a mad whip/ bout to give him a brutal kick/ ruin his chances of usin his dick/   :D

^tut tut, now that totaly oppesses my 'hope you get laid' rhyme ... i mean how can i get laid if hes gonna kick my nuts?


Well that concludes my lesson for today folks, please submit a few bars of nice rhymes in this thread
THANK YOU

 -{bLaDe}
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #1 on: December 30, 2001, 02:33:48 AM »
aint this a bitch, if you were living next door id come over and drag u down the street naked till your skin peels.

its all gravy though.   ;D

peace
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #2 on: December 30, 2001, 02:43:40 AM »
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aint this a bitch, if you were living next door id come over and drag u down the street naked till your skin peels.

its all gravy though.   ;D

peace


ummm....its good to see Blades teachingz are workin. LOL
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #3 on: December 30, 2001, 02:45:09 AM »
Whats Blade Been Smoking?
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #4 on: December 30, 2001, 02:45:39 AM »
dont u start now too!!  

peace
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2001, 02:48:59 AM »
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dont u start now too!!  

peace


LMAO!!!!!!!!!
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #6 on: December 30, 2001, 05:58:51 AM »
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ummm....its good to see Blades teachingz are workin. LOL


LOLOLOL

and ive been wondering that too logic


oh keep teaching us old veteran blade, you are the master of rhyming, please teach us your techniecs and secrets, for we well forever respect you and treat you with DICCK BIAAATCH!

LOL...no really wassup? ???
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #7 on: December 30, 2001, 01:26:53 PM »
LOL damn i'm just playin guyz,  chill LOL

 -{bLaDe}
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #8 on: December 30, 2001, 01:48:40 PM »
yall want the truth bout mista "be nice" ?  i think he needs an apointment at the shrinks office  ;)

CeeRide1984: DONT START!!!
paradox203: FUCK I WUZ JUST BOUT TO
paradox203: LOL
paradox203: hahaha
paradox203: a
CeeRide1984: lol
CeeRide1984: yo jus playin
CeeRide1984: go vote on ITW vs. Cee Ryde
paradox203: LOL howd u know LOL
CeeRide1984: i know u long enough to know you r gonna trip for quite some time
paradox203: LOL
paradox203: :-D
paradox203: lol tone messaged me to vote on his battle
paradox203: so sup
CeeRide1984: vote on mine too
paradox203: i'm to lazy to read lol
CeeRide1984: well good
paradox203: damn ya'll suck
paradox203: u should write nice rhymes
paradox203: like hey jae won/ure kinddness shines liek the sun
paradox203: see like that
paradox203: now if u wrote that  i'd vote
CeeRide1984: shuddup bitch
paradox203: lmfao
paradox203: hahahah
paradox203: lol now u try
paradox203: hey jae won/ure tha pink cloud don
paradox203: see he rules over the pink cloud place
paradox203: or hey itw/bring me milk from the guyz that go moooo
paradox203: see thaz so nice
CeeRide1984: vote dipshit, if u can continue tripping you can vote as well
CeeRide1984: :-D
paradox203: nah trippin comes from the heart
CeeRide1984: lol
paradox203: but all this mean stuff
paradox203: its not rite man
paradox203: skillz r wasted on swearing
CeeRide1984: U DRIVE ME NUTS
paradox203: y cant ya'll rhyme bout god or peace
paradox203: like tha'll be so nice
paradox203: god almighty, his light shines over us/
the only true power who blesses us
paradox203: or sumthin ya know

SO ON AND SO ON,  somebody help me n get dis psyco off me.

oh and "its neva personal" bLaDe  lol

peace
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #9 on: December 30, 2001, 01:52:42 PM »
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paradox203: or hey itw/bring me milk from the guyz that go moooo


damn i ment COWS not GUYS ... ewww

 -{bLaDe}
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #10 on: December 30, 2001, 01:55:24 PM »
lol i know dis lil dood aint talkin shit??
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #11 on: December 30, 2001, 01:55:31 PM »
sumbody kill this fool

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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #12 on: December 30, 2001, 01:57:31 PM »
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sumbody kill this fool



niceness ceeride! lol
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Re: How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe
« Reply #13 on: January 04, 2002, 04:42:21 AM »
lol ahahahaha yall are so crazy
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