Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.

[BL7]

I'm new at doing this, so be easy on me....lol..  

Yo I'm BL7, and I'm steppin' on tha scene/
if ya wanna lyrically test me, a dead emcee you're gonna be/
do you still wanna piece of me?/
don't say yes, ya best say no/
you better show some respect, or ya best lay low/
if you wanna be the best, than just say so/
but you'll never be better than me/
go ask the crowd, they know/
just keystylin' and freestylin' in this bitch/
it'd be better if I could have a mic an' rip ya quick/
cuz I'm tha shit!/
I'll rip your main emcee/
these lyrics is hittin so hard, givin' niggaz a brain disease/
I'm the nigga they came to see/


Remember, I'm still a beginner.  

['Illicit']

yeah for a beginner its not bad, kinda cool actually. few fill in ines but i was feelin it.  since i rated this lol would u mind voting on  the ITW vs. CeeRyde battle?  thanks  

peace

[ToNe1904]

yeah for a beginner its not bad, kinda cool actually. few fill in ines but i was feelin it.  since i rated this lol would u mind voting on  the ITW vs. CeeRyde battle?  thanks  

peace

LMAO@askin to vote on yur battle. its a shame we gotta do that lol

[ToNe1904]

like ceeride said, it was good for a beginner. maybe find another word besidez "best" over n over again tho.
don't say yes, ya best say no/
you better show some respect, or ya best lay low/
if you wanna be the best, than just say so/
this was a tight line righ hea tho...
just keystylin' and freestylin' in this bitch/
it'd be better if I could have a mic an' rip ya quick/

jus keep at it, u get betta wit practice...

[BL7]

Thanks for the responses ya'll. I'm glad I'm okay for a beginner, so when I get good at it, I'ma be rippin' niggaz.  

['Illicit']

fo sho lol.  start with ToNe, he's a easy newbie      
sorry dawg,  "but its neva personal"    

peace

[ToNe1904]

fo sho lol.  start with ToNe, he's a easy newbie      
sorry dawg,  "but its neva personal"    

peace

lolol yah....go head n start wit me homie. ima make up a quote fah ceeride...."Id rather be LUCKY then GOOD"  
Dont trip tho lil homie...ima see yur ass in that royal rumble shit  

[DeaDSouLjaH]

where u from BL7?

[BL7]

Phoenix, Az.

[BL7]

Phoenix, Az. Why you ask?