I-BO ~vs~ Tom187um

[Maestro Minded]

aight.. you're next to feel my rage....




u thaught you were rough, huh??
... hm.. but still you  wanted to escape...
now ima take you on a small  trip
..a small trip to tha otha' side....


facing I-BO in a battle, always being uncenversant//
you'll get beaten in round uno,
lesson one: things aint always plesant//
like a sudan-wallfare, my punshes makes you terror-stricken//
a left and a right uppercut,
like tyson, makes you start remeniscen//
never combine talkin to I-BO with the wrong terminology//
i councorred the knowledge-tree//
so you cant fucc with my biology//
removing your kidnie from your bodies interrier//
dr jekyl, thats me, my flow is too supperior//
now  this  board seems to have a huge overpopulation//
but there can only be one,
it aint difficult for niggaz comprehension//
no fool can stop my flow from this lyrical demonstration//
before steppin once again, you need to upgrade atleast 5 graduations//
when you saw this freestyle,
you payed $5000 for a lyrical operation//
the doctor sprays you with rhymes, to make you have a inch of innovation//
useless,
the only way you can increase is with a "flow-transplatation"//
with I-BO as the donator,but still you cant fade my domnation//
i gotta warn you//
you wont be able to handle my communication//
when i flow
unlike you, i dont use simple words//
your wack flow is a shame for all the fake hiphop-nerds//
should i continue with this rhyme to demolish to 235 percent//
even though my team lost the crew-battle, i still dominates the tournament//
S T H L M is the city i represent//
2 shots with my deasert eagle forces you to circumvent//


as with Kane, i expect you to reply within 24 hours.... this is a freestyle, no prewritten shit... so dont say that you dont have time with 15 min to write a freestyle...


the next and last person for me to beat up will be SKiLLaZTiC

[Doggystylin]

LOLOL.. i see your plan, your goin at all the easy beginers!!. lol

[Hittman]

No He Isnt. He's Going After Tom187um's Crew, Because They Beat His Crew.

[Maestro Minded]

No He Isnt. He's Going After Tom187um's Crew, Because They Beat His Crew.

word up!

[Doggystylin]

ohwell..... i like the idea anyways.

[Maestro Minded]

Tom187.. what u whaiting for??? ... reply with some shit...

ps... : NO GHOSTWRITERS (you know what im talking about)

[Maestro Minded]

yo... i give you 24 hours more to reply... or else it will be walk-over...

[HBKid_Jr]

fuck this shit,  kane told me about this at work,  i have no time for this,  i post my reply in tha crew battle,  i work 25 hours a week an go to school,  i barely have enough time as it is to write a verse for tha crew battle u wanna see my response it will be in tha crew battle,  tryin to make me look like a pussy,  that shit imma spit in tha crew battle will be fire,  cuz ive been extremely angry for tha past week an now this shit

[HBKid_Jr]

fuck this shit,  kane told me about this at work,  i have no time for this,  i post my reply in tha crew battle,  i work 25 hours a week an go to school,  i barely have enough time as it is to write a verse for tha crew battle u wanna see my response it will be in tha crew battle,  tryin to make me look like a pussy,  that shit imma spit in tha crew battle will be fire,  cuz ive been extremely angry for tha past week an now this shit,  an i bet that was a freestyle ,  proberly sat there an thought it up an waited a minute untill u could think of more lines

[HBKid_Jr]

ight im tired of peeps thinkin im a pussy an dont give a fuck if i lose cuz im new at this an my life dont revolve around this stuff,  im a beginner just tryin to improve ight here where

ight here we go again i-blow/  u fuckin worthless like a hobo/  a closet homo overatted like hideo nomo/  u a pussy runin away like my old cat lobo/  now my rhymes may be simple/ but i pop u like a pimple/  an like my dad i'll leave you a cripple/  i pull a fistfull of your girls hair low her brains out her skull/  i leave u runin like tha spainyards from tha bulls/  shit on u from up above like a seagull/  unlike a bad marrage u cant stop this shit an get an anull/  ur mom is a hoodrat/  your rhymes are straight crap/  it put any1 to sleep an take a nap/  whats wit u talkin this smack/  callin me out what are you on crack/  jack ya best step tha fuck back/  b4 u get wacked off/  cuz i dont come soft/  one word an i get u killed like i was a mafia boss/  this shit may be short but it aint sweet/  when u first got beat like a bitch u coudn't face defeat/  an i eat you like meat/  laugh at your family in grief cuz of you bitch ass beef/  it got you killed in you sleep/  as i creep i dont make a peep/   u far from fly just another guy/  i-blow its time to die........

[HBKid_Jr]

also i consider this 24 hours b/c at work on friday kane told me at work an did not go online untill 2 in tha mournin when i actually got tha chance to read your post,  now its saturday about 12:00 at night NY time

[maxi-padz]

i though ti-bo took this quiet easily with hard disses and shit.. his verse was hella nice and well directed.. tom came pretty simplistik.. bu made me laugh in one place...
ur mom is a hoodrat/  lol whered that come from...
but it wasnt enough..
i-bo took this eaasily in the end
vote- I-BO

peace
~1~

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

IBO

sorry tom but i found alot of fill-ins in yur rhyme, it waz nothin compared 2 da shit u do in yur crew battles, those are SICK....maybe u didnt concentrate on this one enough or u rushed it prolly......I-Bo came very tight and maintained........

[bLaDe]

both of u had sum tite shit there, but IBo came a lot titer wid his metas and punches ... Toms verse wuz hot for a starter

my vote : IBO

 -{bLaDe}

[.:N-Imy:.]

First off I'll start with I-BO. Again as I said in your last battle you seem to come witha good line and follow it up with a line of poor standards. I dunno how long you been freestylin but there is room for improvement but of course every1 has room for improvement somewhere. Again lines that were catching:

"facing I-BO in a battle, always being uncenversant//
you'll get beaten in round uno,
lesson one: things aint always plesant//"

"now  this  board seems to have a huge overpopulation//
but there can only be one,
it aint difficult for niggaz comprehension//"

"you payed $5000 for a lyrical operation//
the doctor sprays you with rhymes, to make you have a inch of innovation//
useless,
the only way you can increase is with a "flow-transplatation"//"

As for Tom. I dunno wot he was thinkin whe he wrote that rime. Wether anger or just the fact that he did not have enuff time on his hands to write a proper and at least half decent battle rime. Good lines:

"now my rhymes may be simple/ but i pop u like a pimple/"

"ur mom is a hoodrat"

That hoodrat line had me in lafter for at least 5 mins.

This rime was mostly one sided and therefore easy to vote on. Tom lacked killer lines in this battle and nothing that really stood out or shon. Tom's rime seemed at one point to be even below average. I-Bo (feel like I keep repeatin myself) has room for improvement but from the wor dog there was only one winner in this battle

Vote: I-BO

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I just wanna point out (for no reason) that some ppl may disagree with wot I say but we all don't see rimes the same as others. I have now started to give a analyzation of rimes when I reply as I now feel in doing so I can give the battlers some constructive criticism or praise. When I do do this I don not intentionally go out to diss you or slam your rime I just try to tell the truth but not a str8 2 the point truth (if you know wot I mean). Also (although I don't know of many or any at all) when I vote on rimes they are taken from an un-biased view just becos I may be in beef with some1 or I know some1 quite well I am not gonna side or go against them and that is one thing I tend to keep becos there's no point in voting in a battle if there is one person you either like or dislike and not matter woth the other person's verse is like you still give them the vote or go against them.

Peace