My Girl

[TheSheriff]

My Girl

(Verse 1)
Girl, why you leavin me here, dropping on my knees, shed a tear,
I just want a chance to explain, but you killed me out of fear,
But I’ma pull thru, cause I’m a “soulja” like ya said,
But you hurting me, just like if you want me dead,
You said I changed for the better, but this shit you pulled,
It’s like a poison pen letter, why you do that?
Only vision I’m seeing is pain for me, so, look, Anne-Cat,
I’m down till the end, just if you need me,
But remember, I need you to lead me,
With all that wisdom, I need you to come and feed me,
I’m finding it hard to keep going, just like I am flowing…

(Hook) X2
+Sample+ My girl, my girl…

(Verse 2)
Physically, girl, dayum, you’re hot, but what ya did ain’t no lickshot,
I look at you, and I’m thinking, dayum, have I been drinking?
Too damn fine, I want you to be mine, I’ll toe the line,
But, you won’t even be friends, can’t we just make amends?
Nope? This shit’s just all dead-ends, I’ve lost all emotion,
I need to find a cure, but I’m rubbin in the thug lotion,
I’ll soon be pretty heartless, keeping pretty tartless,
All alone in a cold world, I’m telling you, you’re my one love,
Even in those times when you hated all this thug stuff,
I’m rollin on the floor, OH GOD, callin you a whore,
But you ain’t, and I’m just gonna have to be strong and tough…

(Hook) X2

(Verse 3)
I hope you enjoying your new life, different country and all,
And I’m just stuck here, move fell through, like running into a wall,
Want you more than ever, but I know we won’t talk again, nope, never,
But I still got too many links to sever, like Blofeldt,
Pulling a lever, or pushing a button, not telling me, shit, that was cutting,
Scarred me deep down, but keeping going, wanna get signed to Mo-Town,
Haha, I just wanna be down in that brown, uh, dirt, wanna get there first,
Life can’t get worse, it’s like I’m walking around cursed,
You heard “Unconditional Love”? I know you a ‘Pac fan,
We could never be enemies, cause you’ve been such a good friend to me,
True dat man, Anne-Cat, can’t you see, I ain’t nothing without you to help me…

(Hook) X2


Please gimme a rating out of 5.

[TheSheriff]

Could ya also review this?

[maxi-padz]

aight ima break this down...

verse 1 - shit was nice.. not lyrically liek no masterpeice... but is good nah' mean like its deep and i waz like dayum..

verse 2 - better lyrically, a better verse, again deep and interesting

verse 3 - on same level as verse 2... but it kinda wears thin with the me, me, me rhymen at the end of each bar but iz coo caus the song bout u... nice again...

thiz shit was nice coulda been better lyrically but as a song itz tight... i got the flow off this and its nice
4 mics
peace
~1~