Mark this shit out of 10 PLEASE!!!

[BURNABY]

yo can yall plz mark my rap out of 10.
its abit long but plz read and reply,thx



My ability to rap is so leathal
as popular as tha beetles
doin deals
on tha corner
with anotha nigga
always pack a trigga
incase the niggas bigga
then you
walk with your crew
like a true gangsta
wherin all blue
and if ur wearin red
then you'll be dead
just like Daz said
pump you full of led
cause im from the left coast
tha best coast
tha westcoast
tha coast where u get capped-on
foe wearin a different colour
some say its stupid
but there tha bitch fuckas
see a nigga in red pop-pop
theres a dead mutha fucka
c-walk on his grave
how can i behave
when i wake up every day in drama
look outside and what do i see?
a drive-by, a jaken or maybe just a dead G
I have to wonder when its gonna be me
shaken on tha ground
but until the end of time
I'm still gonna rep my hometown

Chorus: Burnaby,All tha drama in my city
Burnaby,keeps it gangsta
       (repeat)

Now i hear niggas sayin that there gonna kill me
well bring it on nigga cause i got my heat rite beside me/
sayin that im dead
but im still walkin and talkin
the same ol shit that u love to hate
rappin about how im iced out and pushin gate
liftin weights
to help me get stronger
so i dont have to take this shit no longer
big niggas talkin shit
but there tha same niggas that get hit
and suck dick
lil bitch
tryin to hustle me
haha
You'll be dead by the first of tha month
yeah fake G
I got connections world wide
from the West to tha East to the South side
so remember that next time you try to step to me

Chorus
(repeat)


Now what do i see 5 niggas dressed in red
pull out my AK 5minutes later there dead
leave em on tha street
blood comin out of there chest
it was just another drive-by on tha WEST
see em on tha news
tha headline said
another 5 niggas are dead
Reporter talkin about tha crips and bloods
the guys white he dont know how we live it thug
turn off the TV
and get into my ride
time to listen to some westside
jams like the WSC and tha DPG
and my niggas that said FUCK THA POLICE
them NWA niggas
love to bump there shit
but hell its just another day in my city

Chorus
(repeat)
(repeat)







aight so mark what u think out of 10
plz reply thx

[AlerG]

3/10