sleep rhymin

[Ro J. Simpson]

after this im a start battlin...but plz just give me a mark outta ten...here goes

sometimes weed relaxes my emotions
deeper and thicker than any powerful potions
it takes the pain outta life and its commotions
but i dont need no reductions
no fucked up jobs, interviews, inductions
no show no car no broadway productions
i dont need no stalls or malfunctions
no crime, fraud or fucked up corruptions
eventually i wanna settle down start a family
but i cant do that until ive settled my sanity
i dont wanna do this or that or strike in vanity
its as if im under a cloud a sealed closed canopy
i wish i could clear my mind and finally
blanace out my head like gravity
and stop this reppetitive monotony
thats goin round in my head like a pollen bee
i wish i cud get one shot just to shine
if i could be able to that i''d be just fine
so im puttin all my emotion into every line
and make this hill im ascending easier to climb
and actually come across wat im trynna find
a little respect, enuff piece of mind
my body's been pearced like a shot from a nine
i wanna take back everything thats rightfully mine

peace...

[Flurry]

aight i know shit bout rating but 2 me its pretty damn gud base, hardly ne cuss which spoils most rhymes, erm......bit poet like rap style, think its good, id giv it 8.5/10 but what tha fuck do i know? lol

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

8/10