New style? ABABACCCDEDEDE...Does it suck?

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I tried a new style on this, just cuz doing the same thing over gets boring so it's probably gunna be whack...Oh and this rhyme is supposed to be about being ruthless...


I bring the most Rawkus/
More than Wu Tang/
You can't touch this/
Nor get pootang/
You gay, you suck-dick/
Make guys give you brain/
Read this & say fuck it/
Cuz you can't recive/
What i achieved/
Wigga please/
I'm big and you as Lil as Cease/
I'm sicka than a disease/
I'm a hurricane, you's a breeze/
your bitch read my lyrics, bent over and sucked deez/
gave me her car keys/
Sold my CD for 20 G's/
best belive/
I leave.../
Faggots bleedin/
and pleedin.../
For their life/
But they repeating.../
On the mic/
And when i'm readin.../
What they wrote/
I'm feedin.../
Them gunsmoke/
Than they feinden.../
For some hope/
But they was cheatin.../
Like a hoe/
Usin lyrics from ohhla/
Classic like Coca Cola/
Said I told ya.../
like Regis you could phone a.../
Friend/
Befor I put your life to end/
I know you like men/
So I told you to bend/
Shoved the gun in ya ass, and the bullet I send/
RUTHLESS! Like MC Ren/
And I tend/
To never depend/
On women or men/
Than.../
I lend.../
a pen.../
To my friend.../
And when he don't return it, his life is over, I don't pretend/



What did you think of this new style? Is it whack? Hit me back...Tell me if it sux...

[MASSIKAH]

I'm not really feelin this style.
you should stick wit the style you already have.
That's just my opinion ya-know!

HOLLA!!!!!!!

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I cant belive somone actually told me it was good LOL...(Bad Seed)...

[MASSIKAH]

OH NO! He must be tryin' to fukk your skillz off.
LOL!!

HOLLA!!!

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I know it's whack...It has no flow to it...I usually dont rhyme like this, I was just tryin something new...Check my other shit...

[maxi-padz]

the start was all jumbled i hated da start
but keep yo old style coz da middle waz tight
the middle section waz hot
but tha start fucks it up
peace
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