i'm new

[Rabeez]

check this out this RAbeez new to this board
so let me arrive and ride like a mogul Horde
put fake mc's, on their kneez, till the praise this lord
walk into the room bithes start to applaud
my rhymes, 100 percent mines, so don't call me a fraud
my lyrics rip you apart from your spinal cord
shit i tore, the house down to the floor
all these other fools still tryin to score,
while these bitches still beggin me for more
my homeys hardcore, my fools harder than a marine corps
you thought you saw, got smacked down starstruck with Aww
the imprint left on your face, is the dogg paw
1 2 3 4 ! come on fool lets draw,
befo you touch the gun you on the floor
this lyricall bullet ate through you like a pitbull, its raw
fuck the law, we gonna brawl, even in the criminal court hall
only way we stop is if we fall, and that aint gonna happen cause we stand TALL

what do yall think8)8)

[Sikotic™]

fuck the law, we gonna brawl, even in the criminal court hall

I like that bar right there. Overall it was decent.

[I drop rhymes]

dont listen to bdogg
your shits tight.. just dont use the same words so much otherwise TIGHT

[Sikotic™]

What the fuck you mean dont listen to me. What did I say wrong. I said it was good.

[Rabeez]

thanx for your views, i'll continue to post don't trip on bdogg he just didn't feel whereas drop rhymes did, thanx a lot for your encouragement

[maxi-paddy]

it looks like i drop rhymes think he run this shit
lmmfao
dont let it phase u bdogg
how much internet beef do i get
never let it even touch ur heart
peace homie
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[Sikotic™]

Internet beef is stupid. I ain't into that shit. I just wondering what the fuck his problem is. I didn't say anything was wrong with Rabeez's rhyme and he is saying nevermind me. WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT.