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Fatal vs. M Dogg.... take 2
Fatal619:
all day and only one vote??? damn
oh well keep em comin..
one
fatal=1
M Dogg=0
da_notorious_mack:
vote fatal
ILL-Logic-AL:
Firstly, I am far from dickriding here Fatal, because me and M Dogg don't get on well at all, but who are you to come here and act like the illest Textcee ever and drop a below average verse. Your shit wasn't anything special.
1 - A real emcee knows the difference between played punches and fresh punches. Every single punch in your verse was terrible or simply used so much you shouldnt be allowed to rhyme anymore. If your going to spit, dont spit played punches. Theres no point. Just leave the punches alone unless your good at them. For Example, you had a Fat/Phat punchline and a See Me/Optical punch. LOL. Two of the most played punches in Hip Hop History.
2 - Your bars are all over the place. You need to make your bars similar length, it doesnt throw off the flow that way.
3 - Using the same word in the same bar is a Big No in my eyes. Its horrible. You used holding/holding in the first bar, a bad way to start off the verse. People here will vote for you because they dont have any sense of played out punches, but honestly, telling you straight - YOUR WACK!!
Now to M Dogg, your verse wasnt anything special. The flow was there, Old School flow and structure like always. You went for some punches aswell, but none really came out hard. It was an okay verse, even though I had an impression you was forcing some of your lines out. Pretty poor battle really, nothing great came out of it.
Vote - M Dogg
M Dogg™:
--- Quote ---Firstly, I am far from dickriding here Fatal, because me and M Dogg don't get on well at all, but who are you to come here and act like the illest Textcee ever and drop a below average verse. Your shit wasn't anything special.
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Fatal, you don't know our history, but Logic and I aren't friends, so don't trip.
Fatal619:
--- Quote ---Firstly, I am far from dickriding here Fatal, because me and M Dogg don't get on well at all, but who are you to come here and act like the illest Textcee ever and drop a below average verse. Your shit wasn't anything special.
1 - A real emcee knows the difference between played punches and fresh punches. Every single punch in your verse was terrible or simply used so much you shouldnt be allowed to rhyme anymore. If your going to spit, dont spit played punches. Theres no point. Just leave the punches alone unless your good at them. For Example, you had a Fat/Phat punchline and a See Me/Optical punch. LOL. Two of the most played punches in Hip Hop History.
2 - Your bars are all over the place. You need to make your bars similar length, it doesnt throw off the flow that way.
3 - Using the same word in the same bar is a Big No in my eyes. Its horrible. You used holding/holding in the first bar, a bad way to start off the verse. People here will vote for you because they dont have any sense of played out punches, but honestly, telling you straight - YOUR WACK!!
Now to M Dogg, your verse wasnt anything special. The flow was there, Old School flow and structure like always. You went for some punches aswell, but none really came out hard. It was an okay verse, even though I had an impression you was forcing some of your lines out. Pretty poor battle really, nothing great came out of it.
Vote - M Dogg
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u gotta be tha biggest idiot on this fuckin site fist off i didnt' claim shit what i did do is come to this site and challenge ya top dogg. for one
2nd played punches/ i mean for real can u sound anymore idiotic???????
3rd length of bars??? yo, if u really that knowledged go peep a couple of lyrics to any rap song that ain't ABC rhymin u ain't goin to see tha same bar length u flow to a beat and when it's said and done it flows together if u got tha skills to do it u speakin a pattern for rhymin? sorry to tell ya but that's a Common MC one who limits himself
if thats how u rhyme let me give u a lesson bend ya flows and expand your knowledge of tha rap game...
4th usin tha same word in your eyes????? I'm not like u, so i don't flow like u and that has to be the stupidest remark i heard from u in that post...
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