Middleweight Tournarment... TinMan vs. Gareefa

[M Dogg™]

This is the first round. Good Luck.

Rules:
10-15 bar limits
I vote
A battle verse, so punches and the whole nine.

[M Dogg™]

forgot deadline... Sunday night Sept. 22 at midnight Cali time

[Reef]

Your wanted, but you daunted by visions of lead poisioning/
Sacked by the pillow factory for wantin to be a to be a Tin/
So you jump on the Wizards dick and claim you an outlaw now let the mockery begin/
What you shout for? your crew is non exsistant, distant and ur rhymes aint consistent/
Haha but you we're all ready to join elite turn ya bak on the outlawz/
Got bored of onetime & P-G, now you left in debris all ova a PM, js peep/
Am i goin too deep? you scared that i know this shit, and M-Dogg cant deny this/
He was askin members if they wanted u to join dont defend or reply to this/
Bu in the end they didnt want yo sorry ass, now outlaws lying dead around you/
They died quicker than your old man did for drinkin too much liquor/
Now you crewless and cryin like you in distress screamin SOS/
Cuz the remains are lying around you and the tears are pouring out of your veins/
Cuz Im eating dead crews and on that is what i thrive, i throw a high-five at my homie mack/
ima Assailant, i always got ya back now lets burn this corpse and use it as an inhalant/

[Pillow]

*raises my tin cup in the air and bangs it with a spoon to get the crowds attention as i am about to completley murder gareefa* (punk ass bitch)*.....

The amount of voltage I exert forces you to use resistors
but I generate win(d)s like OHMS law through a twister//
In your weak attemt to step close, you just get ghost
because you couldn't cary weight,... even in wet clothes//
what'd you expect hoe, you thought I'd just let go
after all that shit you've talked you must have strepped throat//
your a ghost to be, not even close to me
tin will turn your chest into roastery//
and sell that shit to a local grocery, then you can really live up to what your sposed ta be//
you earn no stripes nor metals thinking you're past my level
so you'll be found by police once the ashes settle//
missing half a hip, with a duck-taped waist, you can tell i'm disslexic by the way you got fucked straight//
so gareefa this will without a doubt become a red sequal//
then I'll turn your eyes around so you can see dead people//
keep that white towell in hand cause you've got little talent man, you wouldn't tower over me even if you were Taliban//
This is the second time a round that I've had to fight bitches
so this ones on the house, like satellite dishes//
the key to success is to be compliant-where-you-can, but you've only repped tha UK at a science-fair-fruit-stand//
I keep my weapons concealed, and the same with my weed stash, and like planes with broken hangers hit the lane like Steve Nash//
your brains been detached, you strain but leak mass, like crash tests at dealer ships your "frame" will be smashed//

RIP BIOTCH........

[Reef]

tihgt verse man.. I wuz gettin worried that u wouldnt show..

[Pillow]

thanks dog, u have improved ur self...and i always show  ;)

[M Dogg™]

Good Lord.... both have improved greatly. Damn, it seems like both are ready for middleweight level. Nice job both of you.

Review:
Gareefa, how in the blue hell you know the PM shit. We have a rat in the Elite...LOL... oh well. Your personals are very much hard hitting. Your lyricals need some more work, but over all, those personals are hard as fuck.

TinMan, good lord son, you jumped up in levels. You personals weren't as hard hitting as Gareefa, but your lyrics were better, and you seemed to be able in make it work. You flowed better and had a better rhyme scheme.

winner = TinMan

[Kill]

Aight Tinman...it's on muthafucka

[Reef]

Gareefa, how in the blue hell you know the PM shit. We have a rat in the Elite...LOL... oh well.

There aint no rat.. Trust.. I know.. hit me up on AIM if u really wanna kno.. pz

[Pillow]

iight nice battle dog, ready to move on to tha next challenger.

[Gay-o Felony]

Ok.. i will spare the investigations... look i know gary outside the net, and he was round mine the other day, and i was looking at my Private Messages, and he saw one of them so i aint leeked nothing and he saw them, and the messages arent that important.. so there ya go..

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Could people please check out my battle against mak and vote plz!


Indecisive... I have finally decided to retire after this battle, so please get with the voting its 1-1 at the moment!

Thanx in advance!

[Kill]

Could people please check out my battle against mak and vote plz! please get with the voting its 1-1 at the moment!

Thanx in advance!

[da_notorious_mack]

lmao.......m dogg how do we find out these things.....we know everything elite  planning.......lol