M-Dogg vs Gareefa ~ Middleweight Tourny ~ Round 1

[ToNe1904]

Aiight, this is the first round. Ill be judging all these matches, except for Femcee's. Verses must be between 15-25 bars. There are NO exceptions, this rule must be followed...any less then 15, any more then 25...will be DQ'd. No topic on this, just strait up battle spits. Verses due Thursday, the 22nd. Midnight KALI time. This rule must be followed also, NO exceptions...if yur verse is 1 minute late, it will be DQ'd. So dont procrastinate yall. Good luck everybody.

[M Dogg™]

Putting a Hall of Fame vet with a lightweight cat/
This is the real street shit, known for the get back/
This kid maybe as hot as fires in Arizona/
But I come colder than Artic winds when I run ya'/
The thing is that I deliver rhymes like Christmas/
I invade your home and leave you family dismissed/
Sorry I smacked your grandma, but her head was bad/
So I did her in like Hopkins did Felix Trinidad/
And only I got lyrics that can be sampled right/
"'Cause I'll beat that ass like Rakim in Open Mic Night"/
What can you bring, the title knows it needs me/
You feel left out like a little bitch in a crowd of three/
Retire now, ‘cause my shit you can never see/
You can be lyrical Rocky, I'll be Muhammad Ali/
Look below, you color blind so you can't see the Elite/
And you a vegetarian, so don't act like you want beef/
If you Irv Gotti, kidnap your lead man so you lose your Rule/
Have you questioning like Jayo, What You Gonna Do?/
The titles mine already, ‘cause it's jacked in my safe/
So now you like Big when he lost his wife, you just lost your Faith/

Peace

[M Dogg™]

"'Cause I'll beat that ass like Rakim in Open Mic Night"/

That was an old line from one of my old school rhymes over a year ago. Just thought I explain why the rhyme is the way it is for any newer people.

[Reef]

First round, ready for me to run your hearse into the ground/
this is my new found glory rippin the elite/
Dogg, you know you cant compete and if your crew was a post i would press delete/
you cant face defeat and im in outlawz, you wanna take my place/
get a real crew with real emcee's, gettin crushed by the debris/
from your crew crumbling around u, while i corner you, surround you/
now what do you expect from a lightweight champion?/
whack rhymes? Well these rhymes desecrate/
so disapear, leave this board fuck you dont ever pursue a rap career/
i heard it aint untrue that you rap through fear/
im not gonna bother retaliating to your weak punches/
you wouldnt know beef if it was in your high school packed lunches
but i pack heat and hot ass storys/
pack dope rhymes and im never corney/
my grandmother gives bad head?/
while one after another ima make sure your whole family dead/
ive decided that your rhymes are misguided/
but gareefa is an emcee that you wish you never had collided/

Good Victory MDogg.. No beef.. peace

[ToNe1904]

aiight yall, i aint getta chance tah vote on this lass night. So ima do em after work tonight.  

peace

[ToNe1904]

good shit yall...

Gareefa, u came pretty tight. Sum good attacks, not too many personals but sum solid punches. U had good flow, coulda used some more multis. Ive seen better from u honestly, but still a good verse.

M-Dogg, u had a real tight verse man. I was feelin it, some decent metas, good flow, good attacks. Not many personals. Overall, a real nice verse.

Vote=M-Dogg

[M Dogg™]

M-Dogg, u had a real tight verse man. I was feelin it, some decent metas, good flow, good attacks. Not many personals. Overall, a real nice verse.

Vote=M-Dogg

Thanks man, it was a first round verse, so as the rounds get deeper, so will I, just hitting on the basics right now.