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makavelithedon vs. Gareefa

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Gay-o Felony:
Well this is close.... mmmmmmm..

Gareefa:

I thought you had a nice verse, thought the punchlines were hitting, and takin effect. I liked this line:

couldnt have picked a worse first-battle/
i un-do the nuts on your car, and i watch the hearse rattle/

thought it was tight... i would give it outta 5:

4.5

Makavelithedon:

I liked your verse, thought it had some dope lines, liked the multi's but i didnt rate the layout that much, no real need for the ~ all the time.. I liked these lines:

Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  

and this one:

I ~"nitrate" ya~ to "blow up", ~desecrate ya~, the ~impact'll~ ~devastate ya~, ~in fact~ my shit is ~major~//  
vindictiveness might ~persuade ya~ to ~elongate ya~ raps, but I'll just ~play ya~//  

i would give you outta 5: 4.7

i think Makaveli takes this vote....

and what ya actually mean by:

~I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//  ????


Indy -- ELITE

Kill:

--- Quote ---Well this is close.... mmmmmmm..

Makavelithedon:

I liked your verse, thought it had some dope lines, liked the multi's but i didnt rate the layout that much, no real need for the ~ all the time.. I liked these lines:

Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  

and this one:

I ~"nitrate" ya~ to "blow up", ~desecrate ya~, the ~impact'll~ ~devastate ya~, ~in fact~ my shit is ~major~//  
vindictiveness might ~persuade ya~ to ~elongate ya~ raps, but I'll just ~play ya~//  

i would give you outta 5: 4.7

i think Makaveli takes this vote....
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Thanx for the feedback homie  ;D. Correct me if I'm wrong, but a victory would give me the lightweight title since Gareefa's (yet) holdin it (?)


--- Quote ---and what ya actually mean by:

~I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//  ????


Indy -- ELITE
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Lol, don't take no offence to that, Mack just told me u and Gareefa knew each other in real life so I just thought I had to put that in...no offence though, really, it's just a battle. He called me a mack-dickridah, I don't even know how he can know I'm down with Mack (?)

Well, anyways
1-0 makaveli

MORE VOTES WOULD BE VERY APPRECIATED

Gay-o Felony:
No, you wont get the "Lightweight Title" coz if Gareefa was defendin the title he woulda had a match with "Lightweight Title Match" next to it. so i dont think so, but you will ave to ask him homie!

Peace --


NEED VOTES ON ME VS VERBALKENT!

Indy

Kill:
Hmm ok cool whether I win or not life will go on without that title I'm just wonderin cause the way I interpreted it a victory over the lightweight title holder means gettin that title like he did when he battled u but whatever, if I win this I'ma be happy with havin won and if not fuck it, I'm quite new to battlin.I'ma vote on ur battle, I'm rite now experiencin how it is when ure waitin for votes and don't fuckin get any peace

Reef:

--- Quote ---Hmm ok cool whether I win or not life will go on without that title I'm just wonderin cause the way I interpreted it a victory over the lightweight title holder means gettin that title like he did when he battled u but whatever, if I win this I'ma be happy with havin won and if not fuck it, I'm quite new to battlin.I'ma vote on ur battle, I'm rite now experiencin how it is when ure waitin for votes and don't fuckin get any peace
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Man it looks like at the moment we aint gonna get no love on this battle.... I mean.. It aint an actual lightweight title match, but if we get no more votes within the next cople of days (or u win this) im quite happy to give u a shot.. u cool with that?

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