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makavelithedon vs. Gareefa

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da_notorious_mack:
yo ill vote if agreed by both of yall,u both ma homies so u know imma b real

Kill:
Yo sup mack, it's cool with me, vote plz

da_notorious_mack:
aiight,but could yall check the fuck mack cypher tell me if i still aiight at spitting,recent shit knocked my confidence

Reef:
Yeah man.. vote

da_notorious_mack:
Vote=Makavelithadon

Imm Explain This Vote

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Gareefa

i break ya neck neck: Gareefa Rippin-the-mic/
you betta hit the deck deck cause im rippin-this-dyke/

I Werent really feelin ya repeatin the word,it jus didnt seem ta fit with a battle verse,dont worry it gets better ;)


and you abide by my rules and regulations/
cause you aint a student no more and you'll never exceed expectations/
your an imprudent little whore cause you dont show no patience/
*you aint in a classroom now/and mack cant bail you out/
thinkin your gonna prevail, even mack got doubt/*


Now this bit here was the best part of ya verse ,nice personals,i liked this a lot

fav lines=*

and crash into a brick wall/and i dont know what you think im sick for/
i got just one question.. What the fuck do u suck **** dick for?/


nice finish,but damn homie which 1 of us u battling?na j/p nice ending,again a nice personal diss


this wasnt 1 of ya best spits but it was still very good i feel the start let u down a bit,apart from that ya ryme was pretty dope

4.2/5

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Makavelthadon


Yo, ~mak~ ready to ~do shit~, ~wack acts~ ~"executed"~ in a ~"row"~//  
the ~flow~ of my ~raps~ get ya ~"electrocuted"~//

This was an average start,with your opening too bars u need to really impress,it makes ppl wanna read more,but still aiight start


~trip on~ copycats, ~hoe~ YOU prolly "bite" like ~"piranhas"~ and still couldn't ~"flow"~ on the ~"Amazonas"~//  
*Ga"reefa" ain't ~"dope"~ with an ounce of ~"marihuana"~//  
I ~"spit"~ like a ~"llama"~ and ~"stick"~ ya like Jigga's ~dick~ into ~Carmen~// *  
I'm ~steadily innovative~, you better give ~credit to me~ ~instead of hatin~//  


this bit was dope,you used ya knowledge of hip hop(summat i know u have a lot of,only problem is that usin a pun about a commercial artist can become played quick,better off doin punches bout underground rappers,it makes the punch sound more intelligent


I can still wound ya~, ~explicit and equipped~, ya already got ~hit "AND" kicked~ by ya ~"Indecisive" bitch~//

Gareefa i know that hurt!dope personal,nice way to end the ryme


Nice ryme,id usually say a tie but imma havta judge it by the starts,yall pretty equal on every other part of tha ryme,so i havta give it to makaveli!

hope yuall have a rematch,i really enjoyed ya battle

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