Callin out another competitor..? Who's up for it..

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

Hey Homies, so who's up for a battle, with no bar restrictions, just spit a verse and then vote.. The one with 3 straight votes wins the round..

So i will wait for a challenger, and you spit first... K

Im waiting..!

Peace -- Explicit

[da_notorious_mack]

sup,im down,chance 2 use a new style ive been working on,can yall give me sum feedback on this verse


Yo "Explicit"...you rap-da-basic, and undergo cranium decapitation//
Ill smack-ya-face-den destroy ya optic wit laser lacerations//
Stab you wit !thumb-tacks! cuz I don't "feel" ya style or ya !"numb"-raps!//
Slayin Dumb-cats who couldn't "beat me" if I was their private "punch-bag"//
My rhymes dispense ya defense as these lyrical blows condense//
Ya lyrics ain't worth a dime, like bums spittin <"free"-styles>//
Ya ~rhymes~ is long and wack just like dat movie <"The Green-Mile">//
Hectic-Methods designed to leave ya confused like ~neglected-stressed-kids~//
My style Perfected* wit lyrical blades and even vets get left wit-flesh-ripped~//
You got a "pen and paper" but I know you ain't ready to "test"-this~//
To keep ya skull and spine Connected ya ~'bess-quit~ or leave wit ya ~neck-slit~//
You Fucked-up, talkin all your shit and now ya luck's-up//
You <rhyme lame> and I <"entertain brains"> wit lyrical ~"'fun'-'da'-'mentals'"~//
With my fists wrapped in gauze I throw hooks and punch ya dimple~//
I've decided to crush ya Verse-wit Unrehearsed-Shit dat niggaz worship//(my skillz)
Watch as my words-rip through ya body until ya fuckin nerves-spilt//
Leavin ya frame full of <contrusions> after dis <lyrical intrusion>//
My lyrics should be against da law because I'm <alphabet abusin>//
~Whats-this?~, I'll grab ya head and shove-it down my ~musket~//
Ya rhymes is soft as ~Charmin~ while mine are harder dan an elephant's ~tusk-is~//
Wreckin contestants wit deadly weapons and no recession to !aggression!//
Heart Arrestin!(cardiac) so you can't come wit "shit" like !indigestion! (heartburn)//
You should broadcast ya rhymes on ~CBS~ cuz all I ~C (see) is BS (bull shit)~//
I just load my lyrical tec and bust off wit a *full-clip*//

['Illicit']

whoahooohoooo lol yo dog that was some of the illest shit I've ever read!

couldn't "beat me" if I was their private "punch-bag"//

like bums spittin <"free"-styles>//  

My lyrics should be against da law because I'm <alphabet abusin>//  

You should broadcast ya rhymes on ~CBS~ cuz all I ~C (see) is BS (bull shit)~//  

these lines are outstanding man.  

that shit could challenge one of ToNe's lyrical sensations imo.

peace

[:.Da6shoota.:]

That was some tight shit Mack.

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

K, that was some tight shit man, good goin, now heres my verse..!


Im entering into a hole new level//
let me take time to perfect my style, let me lacerate your face and obliterate your mental state, and cause mass confusion, till the break of your skin, an peals of like enamel// When i loose, it wont matter, coz when i inflict a lyrical massacre, emcee's will cease to exist an scatter// I think you need to concentrate, you got lyrics that i could sit down with and evaluate// With your new style, your releasing so much fear// Yeah right, you think ima back down an head outta here// I'll blow ya fuckin brains out into the fuckin retro sphere, with your life on a life line, an almost ova// Deminish your companions too and launch em in to a fuckin supa nova// To the extent of death, i can get shit ff my chest, i will completely destroy you, i bet you thinked// Naw, just make your life, not worth living, erase you from this worl, an class you as extinct..!// Jumpin up with your headphones blearing// Rip em off, murder em. and make you wear em as fuckin ear rings// I think, that you'll be needing some professional help, coz i think you need to get your style sorted and put the old one on the shelf its time for a whole new era, step to this shit, i dare ya// Explicit to make your eyeballs curl, think your gettin out alive, not from this world// Sit down and think about it, your stuck in here 4eva, like an innocent bystander in a murderous mosh pit// Taking you out for the next round, i could lyrically sniper you from a distance, without makin a sound//  

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

So get voting..!



Peace -- Explicit

['Illicit']

yo, tight shit Explicit, but Mack took this, his verse is unfadable. killer lines up in that piece. lol, your unlucky Ex, cuz mack sometimes spits tight shit, sometimes he's off game a bit, u caught him on the wrong day dawg.

vote: Mack

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

So we meet again.. Illicit... lol Thanx for ya vote, i think he's verse is tight to, but i aint scared, im up for any challenge, tryin to get a win, and some titles under my belt, after all me is just a newbie at this stuff lol

Peace -- Explicit..!

['Illicit']

yeh lol we meet again. yeh dont be scurrred lol. fuck it, keep elevatin and in time you'll prosper. no doubt homie. but if ur really a newbie to this rap shit, then ur far better than I was when I started out last year. props.

peace

[simplicate]

Explicit's verse was a lot iller than the last one I read....but Mack just has way better punches and wordplay. Vote = Mack

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

Thanx man.. Don't worry im not Scared *Bites Nails*.. lol PEACE -- Eplicit


Votes, need Votes.!!!!!

[da_notorious_mack]

sup yall,can we get sum more votes

[:.Da6shoota.:]

Mack has my vote.

Explicit U gonna be aight tho if U can gain more control over ya flow & expand your vocab  

[Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit]

Thanx man.... Well i guess i lost this one again... lol Oh well, i will win i tell that one..!


Til the next time people...

Peace -- Explicit