Hatesrats Vs. Tanjint(from the crew battle)

[Tanjential]

Yo Hatesrats,remember this shit?

Hatesrats_ on: 06/10/01 at 10:56:08  

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A dogg...thanks for the respond..on my freestyle post....You were the first to respond to any of my shit...I added a little bit more to it....check it out....(I've become a member since then)  
 
(I'm drunk as fuck)  
 
P.s....nice Muthaphukkin' flow!!!!  

^^^hatesrats

remember that shit? i was the first to respond to your whack flows/
i was embarrassed to even to be in your post so i entered through the internets back door/
so tell me,who wants to say "fuck me"?/
shut the fuck up,you lyrically ugly/
yeah you DO rhyme blind,cuz you can't see that we're all better than you/
whatever you fool,it was inevitable/
that we'd put you in your place/
you talk about the same stupid shit as the rest...whores,gays/
and your dissing the dictionary? dumb shit you should live in one/respect my superiority and authority:give in son/
not only can you not spell,but your making up words...i mean "unledgable"?/
Crappy Suckass Nigga-wannabes idiocy is incredible/
i can't understand half of what you typin,another language?go back to mexico/any beef with T? you'll wanna let it go/
it's a damn shame,you had to copy and paste and screenname/
once you gathered the guts and nuts to face this MC's reign/
of terror over mental weaklings/
i'm the fire thief's king/
that means i'ma poet while you just try "Move the Crowd"/
you know your whack,inside you're hearin boos and loud/
yeah i am intellectual,and you can't even spell it/
you know what that says to me? BTW you ain't rebellious/
just cuz you listen to gangsta rap that cusses you a "soldier"/
fuckin military men hate "niggers" so what's in that stump on your shoulders?/  
or you call yourself a soldier cuz you wearin an army thong/
all your gay blowjob jokes don't harm me none/
i'll give you some props though,you were able to use the word decimate/
but still in your mind the truth i speak of your stupidity will resonate/
i don't know if you're really dumb/but you rap like you are/
you tried to say i bite and i'm as real as they come/so that's too far/
enemies shorter than three what high?/
you gotta fucked eye?/
cuz you seem to have a dick in your brain/
shit is insane/ to think that you're born with anything valuable that i don't have/
you gotta good rhymin dictionary that you gone grab?/
i don't even need to read,bitch i write,you can't do neither/
i depress optimists/rhymes too hot to miss,/bitch check this lyrical fever/
i don't even need big words to be better than you,check your verses last line/
"SPEAK" and "PISS" don't rhyme!/
shit don't get all pissed it's just one verse/
i just hope your lesson is done learned/
when i come i come correct,only thing you cum's sperm/
take back your whack accusations and i'll have you UN-spurned/
damn but still give me props because in that one verse
i made you look like a dumb nerd/

take back the biting accusations and now TRY to tell me i wasn't born with at LEAST equal talent/
i unleashe these talons/when you speak bullshit to-TANJINT

[Hatesrats™]

Lol....Aiight Tangi


Tan-gi-ble: (adJ.) 1. (A) Discernible by the feel:
                                Capable of being touched

Obliteration complete
been waiting for a slab of sacrificial meat to compete
so Hates can seperate heads from necks & ankles from feet
The last to speak, the furture Dead poet's will teach...
listen to the speech, I touch pen's and forcast a flood
scribble in blood, puncture my heart nothin' but love
your Nugacity is plain & clear to see
your ability is not Tangible, sufficiant enough to fucc with me
pinpoint or followed along a dotted line
touching but not intersecting irrelevent rhymes..
Deaf & Blind to those who don't deserve my time
your blind knowledge is your ignorance for studing mine..lol
Tattoed your mind with the little simplistic line's..
and don't hate the meaning of three apples high....OOO
cause you can't figure the speech, let the color release
like the shade of nutts when the jackin' ceased..
that's you!
shook Tangint.......Stained the Fleece
your ability is like an easy snap of the finger's to me
not worth my time to spite
you will get nothin' but a 4 minute passage of light
but back in the dark cause no-one even knew you write...
I'm jealous of ya knowledge....and love the way you insult my race.....whoa!!!
for that I displace ya taste and wish death to your face..
Cali is the land where my heart will stop.....and until I die it's always Aztlan till I drop..
Sacrificial virgin's getting their hoe card yanked from they chest...(Heartless)
left on the temple for less and vanquished with ya bloody heart pealed from the stress...
I'm blessed with my love for Life, but the warrior mentality is part of my pride.....
I feel sorry for those who claim, fullness but only hollow inside....it's Fake
just re-read this take and mention the number of times I made a mistake....and multiply that by a miliion times, that's my middle finger sayin' hi! every line...

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glad to know ya read the rhymes that I wrote
every line is a response to mine....lol
It makes me feel good.

_CsN_
Hatesrats 2oo2

[Tanjential]

(search for the sarcasm)

Oh condemation! It's the last command
Oh situation here's some fast demands
We passed in hand
Our own undoing
while scientists aren't trying this,too busy sun soothing
Impossible such a fun word
Theater of the absurd
leaves me amused easily
as i look for my muse secretly
Everything that can go wrong will go wrong
and the show still goes on!
I pull down the curtain
and easy thinkers are still uncertain
Oh well i think i'm so deep and unique,eh?
Let's see you try to revolutionize without cliche
Howling while in existence and boring jobs analyses
I think too much to the point of self imposed paralysis
But it's nice because i can observe
what stood under
and unsure and absurd
Impossible: such a fun word
i feel like a damn good chord progression
Without a good vocal melody to support a worthwhile lyrical expresiion
or maybe vice verse
oh happy day relief excuse eh i tried first
maybe i'll die of thirst
it's a crying shame
death is everythings underlying theme
why can't we confront him?
i'm screaming,i'm running! I'm running!

kinda funny that the only thing you can diss me on is that i read our whole rhyme...it's like you know even your crew doesn't cuz noone has the attention span to read whole verses...are hip hop fans attention spans that bad? damn no wonder it's so easy to impress and be exceptional,i mean it's one thing to check every line for little mistakes like you claim i do but what the fuck is "unledgable" i only say something if
a)it's horrendously misspelled,you didn't use the word right,it's not even a word..like unledgable....i'm thinking you meant illegible so what does that say to an intellectual like myself?
b)it's a simple word you fucked up

aND i'm Tanjible because my shit is usually deeper poetry so when you think about what i say you can "feel" it and "feel" is associated with touch and touch is associated with tanjibility(tangibility,what the hell is Tangint?)
and also because i cover many subjexts when i speakand write which is a form of poetry called "strem of consciousness" it's pretty much "going off on tangents/tanjints"...dig?


yeah you used some big words but how many did you RHYME? and did you use the big words comfortably....they should flow smoothly...it's like you placed them in a manner to be a big deal....if you were really good with language then it's not a big deal to have a large vocab..i use it smoothly and it's natural to me,i haven't needd a dictionary since about 7th grade.....

call me a nerd but intelligence is important to the poet but based on csn...not the MC-this was prose poetry LMAO,peace-Tanjint