Luni Vs. ONETIME

[Luni SD]

Alright Im here...you wanted to battle here...its on. Whatchu wanna do now. Winner of this leaves the other place for good.



well since you aint on...i aint gonna wait for your ass...heres my freestyle...first to 10 votes wins.

MASTER MIND TRICKS, BLOW YOUR FUCKIN HEAD OFF WITH ONE CLICK/
SET TO SMOKE YOUR WHOLE FAMILY/ EXTORTE MONEY/
LIKE SMUGGLIN MONOPOLY OUT OF JEOPARDY/
YOU CLAIM YOU’RE A THUG/
BUT YOU GOT SMOTHERED BY A FILIPINO SPILLIN OUT BLOOD/
CLICK CLACK, I SMACK, CLAP TRIGGERS AT THIS BITCH/
EMPTY THE CLIP, SHAKE THE FEDS QUICK, GOT ONETIME SLOBBIN DOWN ON WESTCOAST DICKS/
YOU COCKSUCKIN FAG/
I PUT YOU NEXT TO YOUR MOM SUCKIN A DEAD MANS SACK IN A BODY BAG/
YOU SUCKIN DICK LIKE YOUR DRINKIN A SLURPY/
SHITTIN HERPES, CAUSE YOU TALK SHIT, BITCH, YOU DYING QUICKLY SO YOUR BITCH ASS BETTER HURRY, BEFORE YOUR PAKI ASS GETS BURRIED NEXT TO OSMA, WHO FINGER FUCKED YOUR MAMA/ YOU WANT DRAMA/
YOU A KINDERGARTEN THUG CLAIMIN YOU A CRIP/ MIGHT AS WELL LEAVE YOUR HEAD UP A BULLS ASS, CAUSE EVERYTHING YOU SAY IS BULLSHIT/
CLAIMING YOU GOT GUNS/
BUT YOU GOT A SUPERSOAKER, I CLEAN OUT YOUR LUNGS QUICKER THAN WINTER FRESH GUM/
LAY YOU IN A DUMPSTER/
CAUSE YOU FUCKIN WITH A REAL CALI LIFE THUGSTA
SHOTGUNS AND GLOCKS TO BUST, 20 ROUND CLIPS TO LEAVE YOU IN THA DUST/
POPPIN, CLIPPIN THE NINE, CHROME, SWERVE TO THE CURB/
ROLLIN, SMOKIN THE HERB
JUST LIKE YOUR RHYMES, YOU'LL GETSMOKE/
AND LET YOU KNOW THIS GANG BANGIN SHIT AINT NO MUTHAFUCKIN JOKE/

[ToNe1904]

aiight luni....u gotta do thiz shit up, fah SD playboy!  

[Luni SD]

I dont even think my shit was that good...but fuck it...probably better than what onetime got...fuckin 2pac biter!!  

[ToNe1904]

we'll see wha Onetime bring...hopefully itll be hiz own spit lol

[PakiGangsta]

Alright Im here...you wanted to battle here...its on. Whatchu wanna do now. Winner of this leaves the other place for good.



well since you aint on...i aint gonna wait for your ass...heres my freestyle...first to 10 votes wins.

MASTER MIND TRICKS, BLOW YOUR FUCKIN HEAD OFF WITH ONE CLICK/
SET TO SMOKE YOUR WHOLE FAMILY/ EXTORTE MONEY/
LIKE SMUGGLIN MONOPOLY OUT OF JEOPARDY/
YOU CLAIM YOU’RE A THUG/
BUT YOU GOT SMOTHERED BY A FILIPINO SPILLIN OUT BLOOD/
CLICK CLACK, I SMACK, CLAP TRIGGERS AT THIS BITCH/
EMPTY THE CLIP, SHAKE THE FEDS QUICK, GOT ONETIME SLOBBIN DOWN ON WESTCOAST DICKS/
YOU COCKSUCKIN FAG/
I PUT YOU NEXT TO YOUR MOM SUCKIN A DEAD MANS SACK IN A BODY BAG/
YOU SUCKIN DICK LIKE YOUR DRINKIN A SLURPY/
SHITTIN HERPES, CAUSE YOU TALK SHIT, BITCH, YOU DYING QUICKLY SO YOUR BITCH ASS BETTER HURRY, BEFORE YOUR PAKI ASS GETS BURRIED NEXT TO OSMA, WHO FINGER FUCKED YOUR MAMA/ YOU WANT DRAMA/
YOU A KINDERGARTEN THUG CLAIMIN YOU A CRIP/ MIGHT AS WELL LEAVE YOUR HEAD UP A BULLS ASS, CAUSE EVERYTHING YOU SAY IS BULLSHIT/
CLAIMING YOU GOT GUNS/
BUT YOU GOT A SUPERSOAKER, I CLEAN OUT YOUR LUNGS QUICKER THAN WINTER FRESH GUM/
LAY YOU IN A DUMPSTER/
CAUSE YOU FUCKIN WITH A REAL CALI LIFE THUGSTA

and no K-O's.........and unlimited barz..........u mite wanna extend ur barz.kaz mine wud be long......imy rhymes r done..as soon as u reply that u agree to this.i'll post my shit.......

here it go's........................

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[Luni SD]

and no K-O's.........and unlimited barz..........u mite wanna extend ur barz.kaz mine wud be long......imy rhymes r done..as soon as u reply that u agree to this.i'll post my shit.......

here it go's........................

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just post it  


im a add more bars

[PakiGangsta]

LUNI
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Alright Im here...you wanted to battle here...its on. Whatchu wanna do now. Winner of this leaves the other place for good.  



well since you aint on...i aint gonna wait for your ass...heres my freestyle...first to 10 votes wins.

MASTER MIND TRICKS, BLOW YOUR FUCKIN HEAD OFF WITH ONE CLICK/
SET TO SMOKE YOUR WHOLE FAMILY/ EXTORTE MONEY/
LIKE SMUGGLIN MONOPOLY OUT OF JEOPARDY/
YOU CLAIM YOU’RE A THUG/  
BUT YOU GOT SMOTHERED BY A FILIPINO SPILLIN OUT BLOOD/
CLICK CLACK, I SMACK, CLAP TRIGGERS AT THIS BITCH/  
EMPTY THE CLIP, SHAKE THE FEDS QUICK, GOT ONETIME SLOBBIN DOWN ON WESTCOAST DICKS/
YOU COCKSUCKIN FAG/
I PUT YOU NEXT TO YOUR MOM SUCKIN A DEAD MANS SACK IN A BODY BAG/
YOU SUCKIN DICK LIKE YOUR DRINKIN A SLURPY/
SHITTIN HERPES, CAUSE YOU TALK SHIT, BITCH, YOU DYING QUICKLY SO YOUR BITCH ASS BETTER HURRY, BEFORE YOUR PAKI ASS GETS BURRIED NEXT TO OSMA, WHO FINGER FUCKED YOUR MAMA/ YOU WANT DRAMA/
YOU A KINDERGARTEN THUG CLAIMIN YOU A CRIP/ MIGHT AS WELL LEAVE YOUR HEAD UP A BULLS ASS, CAUSE EVERYTHING YOU SAY IS BULLSHIT/  
CLAIMING YOU GOT GUNS/
BUT YOU GOT A SUPERSOAKER, I CLEAN OUT YOUR LUNGS QUICKER THAN WINTER FRESH GUM/
LAY YOU IN A DUMPSTER/
CAUSE YOU FUCKIN WITH A REAL CALI LIFE THUGSTA
SHOTGUNS AND GLOCKS TO BUST, 20 ROUND CLIPS TO LEAVE YOU IN THA DUST/
POPPIN, CLIPPIN THE NINE, CHROME, SWERVE TO THE CURB/
ROLLIN, SMOKIN THE HERB
JUST LIKE YOUR RHYMES, YOU'LL SMOKE/
AND LET YOU KNOW THIS GANG BANGIN SHIT AINT NO MUTHAFUCKIN JOKE/
IM SLICKER THAN YOUR SHADOW CASTED IN THE DAYLIGHT/
IM COME AT YOU WITH SICKNESS MAKING 4TH GENERATION CHILDREN CRY/
I CUT YOUR INTESTINES OUT WITH MY LYRICAL FORCE/
CLOSE DOORS, AND MAKE YOU SWEAT WITH ACID THAT CLOGS UP YOUR PORES/
I BREATHE RADIATION TO MAKE YOUR TONSILS MELT/
I MAKE RHYMES HOTTER THAT THE DEVILS OWN SOUL COME RUNNING OUT YOUR MOUTH AND RIP OUT YOUR KIDNEYS WITH YOUR OWN BELT/
I TOLD YOU THAT YOU COULDNT MAKE ME LEAVE/
IM HERE LIKE A DISEASE, THAT INFECTS YOUR INTERNET CONNECTION AT HIGH SPEEDS.



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ONETIME
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well.......on da second hand....no...........i wont give u netime...ur barz r wack...and u said i'm a wak MC....u shud have taken more time........

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remember LUNI
i'm gona battle u and beat u at ur own level
my level is faar to off for u to undastand...
u shud have read my earlier battles  
before sayin that ur wack rhymes r too wack fo me
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(ROUND 1)
Yo HOLLYWOOD LUNI, im sicker then you, i dont spit lyrics, im spitting the flu, youve heard of the pick of the litter, fuck that, its time to pick on you, cause you thought you couldnt be fucked with until i stuck my dick through your internet connection and spewed..... Ewwww....  

(ROUND 2)
Now im gon' bust that ass 'n' shatter you like glass bitch, my thesis leaves you in peices slower than old molasses/  
Faggot tryin to send me PM's makin passes, Ill rip out your windpipe and break ya glasses you wont last it/  
Stretching your torso like elastic till it snaps like plastic, violent bad shit that gets very drastic ya been smashed quick/  
Get ready for manslaughter.....  
 
Its tha lyrical marotter gettin the battle hotter like you died in one shot as board trotters watch me strangle your daughter with jewelry you just bought her/  
These bars are tramplin emcees like an elite of champion boxers that put this cock jocker away like "Grocery stockin mobstaz"/  
Smooth like "silkk" and Ill frie ya up like the "shocker" keep comin back Im a stalker call me the rythimic night walker/  
Just like columbine I make an outline and chalk all you shit talkers /  
 
And ya dont know how to bang offenders "fail"  
when im tested no matter the set you with or what side you claim its too perplexive and insane to explain/  
Just run when you start to feel the pain of my "sulfuric acid" rain, this thang aint a game I bet your ashamed for being slain/  
These Freestyles are diabolical eating particles of your brain, spitting IONs at this diseased lion makin him tame, while burning his mane and discracing ya name/  
Excruciatingly lame, youve been CRIPpled and deranged by words i slang that got ya sustained like "silent reading"/  
Watch me thrive and see if you can survive this violent beating full of abuse and extremely mean mistreating/  
Son your nothin but a bad seedling stoppin ya breathing till your asshole is bleeding  
from our mono e mono battle meeting/

(ENTER DA RHYME DEVIL....FINISH HIM !!!!!)
murder this "Anal MAstubator " by slowing down his "rapid eye movement"/
Paki receives a standing ovation while the MASTURBATOR gets nothing but 'boos-sent'/
check the "inflation" on the lyrics "spent"/
historians and chronologists can't even follow the sequence/
in which I leave this "Peasant" bent...deprive this gay whore like 40 days of lent/
repent or observe my sixth sense...where I see nothing but dead people/
the Paki is beyond evil spitting lyrics beyond lethal...I'm too "ill" to be legal/
so I enter your subconscious just to "compact" your brain like the volkswagon "beetle"/
I "control" your mind like a certified member of the "Thought Police"/
put you in a state of lyrical hypnosis with deep sleep/
experience death, the absence of grief/
infinite dosage, leave you constipated for weeks/
my lyrics are better known as "rolaids" because in "text", they "spell relief"/
fiber optics can't observe the speed in which I unleash the beast/
disguised as slanderous speech in addition to the punches released/
I'll have you at the edge of your seat, deceased/
like a deranged dentist pulling unnecessary teeth/
but leaving them white like clorax bleach...Aids is my cousin...anthrax, my niece/
We come from a line of killers, making sure you rest in peace
put this AMC in a "gold" casket underneath the earth with dimensions about six feet deep/
seeing the "MASTURBATOR" family weep, is enough for the Paki to "cop" a seat/
at the cemetary and smoke a cigar with your pops and the rest of your peeps/
In one word the Paki is vicious, verbally malicious
you can "dream of genie" and still not beat me with "three wishes"/
I'm serving the disses like waiters serving the dishes/
zoomorphically speaking I'm a brown  making your wife my mistress/
as her MASTURBATOR is left swimming in the ocean with the fishes/
overtake your "throne" and write my best-seller, "From Rags to Riches"/

-----------------------------------------think that was enuf.............

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FIRST MC to gain 1o votes WINS.

NO k-O's
e.Z  
 (i addeds ur new part 2.lets see where u get with it...lol!!)

[infinite59]

Luni's rhyme was dope as fuck, but OneTime came more lyrically complexed and detailed.....It don't matter that his shit was longer... Bar for Bar it was a better rhyme, but not by much.

Vote- Onetime

[Luni SD]

YOUR RHYMES ARE WACK LOL


let the voting begin

[TimeLock]

Luni's rhyme was dope as fuck, but OneTime came more lyrically complexed and detailed.....It don't matter that his shit was longer... Bar for Bar it was a better rhyme, but not by much.

Vote- Onetime

[Luni SD]

alright his rhymes were more lyrical than mine i admit that but im not gonna change it but i am gonna post this up that i just wrote to show yall i can come with more lyrical shit than what i originally posted (still not long but fuck it)


IM SLICKER THAN YOUR SHADOW CASTED IN THE DAYLIGHT/
IM COME AT YOU WITH SICKNESS MAKING 4TH GENERATION CHILDREN CRY/
I CUT YOUR INTESTINES OUT WITH MY LYRICAL FORCE/
CLOSE DOORS, AND MAKE YOU SWEAT WITH ACID THAT CLOGS UP YOUR PORES/
I BREATHE RADIATION TO MAKE YOUR TONSILS MELT/
I MAKE RHYMES HOTTER THAT THE DEVILS OWN SOUL COME RUNNING OUT YOUR MOUTH AND RIP OUT YOUR KIDNEYS WITH YOUR OWN BELT/
I TOLD YOU THAT YOU COULDNT MAKE ME LEAVE/
IM HERE LIKE A DISEASE, THAT INFECTS YOUR INTERNET CONNECTION AT HIGH SPEEDS.

[BossPlaya]

i pretty much agrre with INFINITE N TIMELOCK

[PakiGangsta]

its 3-0.we need more votes.........

[Luni SD]

its 3-0.we need more votes.........

you wont get votes right away

[Youngster323]

Vote- Onetime

yea agree here, very close