rippin that drake Uptown beat

[J. Bryson]

alright now i'm back on it

http://www.divshare.com/download/8253005-c5d

[LAXCENTRAL]

ITS ALRIGHT

[QuietTruth]

I'm wit Lights.

[J. Bryson]

it's all a work in progress

kind of a personal record to me, i like it. i satisfied myself with this one i felt like i hit it.

thanks for the feedback anyway tho.

+1 thanks for checkin

[QuietTruth]

Yeah...I hear you, but you def. dropped better, not sayin' this is wack..but it's aight.

[OchoCinco]

nice, ur shit is always pretty good.

[Nigga_With_An_Additude]

hey man you wanna get signed?then you gotta stop dragging your shit,you would have alreasdy lost interscopes attention in the beginning.

want them to lisrten to your shit,you gotta put the tempoi at not a fast beat but a kinda fast and slow and don't give them the beat at the beinning..............man it is dragging.......it seems to want to get shot to be put out of misery.........

[The Phoenix]

hey man you wanna get signed?then you gotta stop dragging your shit,you would have alreasdy lost interscopes attention in the beginning.

want them to lisrten to your shit,you gotta put the tempoi at not a fast beat but a kinda fast and slow and don't give them the beat at the beinning..............man it is dragging.......it seems to want to get shot to be put out of misery.........

I agree.  You speed the verses up, and you got it.

[J. Bryson]

i keep all the constructive criticism in mind. ya already know