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Hot new rapping and beats from me, feedback please!!

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Now_Im_Not_Banned:

--- Quote from: indijinouz on November 09, 2002, 01:41:58 AM ---HAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm sorry i had to laugh tho ... i can just picture you sittin' in your room flowin' that shit into your computer, a 13 year old little teenager tryin' to act hard and gangster on the other side of the world... i can just picture him in a little british school outfit and a doorag, with a piece of paper in front of him flowin into a little ass computer mic, he actually sound like he whispering shit so no one in his house would hear him.... maybe it's cause i'm faded that i can picture that so vividly and its so hilarious to me, but regardless, its funny as hell. sorry, i hate to be a hater, but you need to take a step back and look and see where the line is between a fan and somone whose involved in the game... you got a little too carried away, stepped over the line, and tried to get involved... your better off a fan ... its aite, you just wasn't cut out for beatmaking thats all... well maybe if you try hard at that u can make some good ones, but i wouldn't count on flowin' AT ALL, not 1 percent ... hell nah, forget about that shit dogg...but like i said, i hate to be a hater, but under the circumstances of this being to damn funny and most of all the fact that i'm toked, i had to say something ... one love!

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LMAO...Phiasko...What the fuck is your problem...U think you're all hard because you're fuckin with Fata now...NO!...I heard you rap, and trust me, you aint too great either...lolol...What happened to the days when you were cool, when u gave good constructive criticism instead of tryna diss everybody...Go back to Cuba u fuckin dickhead...

Trizz:
Im faded too and yo LMAO!!!!!
i picture it too but like not a school boy
more of a white british boy with a t shirt that says
"B- boy" in kiwi lime and a red hat backwards
and a gay Lookin adias windbreakers in black
and a pair of pumas LMAO irv gotti would laugh his ass off
and ja rule would have a heart attack from laughing
and on the next murda inc cd they gon have a skit
wit remo and that pastor from "ghetto bapist church"
smoking a Blunt and changing radio stations and one time
that song will come up and the'll crack up laughing and then irv gotti comes in with a fake english boy pretending to be you kidnapped and the'll shoot you up and then smoke n laugh some More LMAO

Trizz:
in the video he does the hammer in a all
white screen and brake dances LMAO

On The Edge of Insanity:
Ok so the rapping on this track isn'r exactly great. Now that you've got all that out of your system, can anybody prehaps download the beat snippits file and give me some (constructive) feedback on the beats please?

Feedback will be appreciated.

//:in-DIJI-nouz..:

--- Quote from: Trizz on November 12, 2002, 01:13:14 AM ---Im faded too and yo LMAO!!!!!
i picture it too but like not a school boy
more of a white british boy with a t shirt that says
"B- boy" in kiwi lime and a red hat backwards
and a gay Lookin adias windbreakers in black
and a pair of pumas LMAO irv gotti would laugh his ass off
and ja rule would have a heart attack from laughing
and on the next murda inc cd they gon have a skit
wit remo and that pastor from "ghetto bapist church"
smoking a Blunt and changing radio stations and one time
that song will come up and the'll crack up laughing and then irv gotti comes in with a fake english boy pretending to be you kidnapped and the'll shoot you up and then smoke n laugh some More LMAO

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! thats some funny shit.... don't you come up with the craziest shit when your high?

Anyways, Logic, my bad, didn't mean to hate, I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote that... I'll check it out later and give you some constructive criticsim on the beat. I can't help you with the rappin'. one!

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