Author Topic: Funeral  (Read 322 times)

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Funeral
« on: October 24, 2009, 05:34:58 PM »
Sittin here, scared stiff, barely wana move,
Family, surrounding me, a tragedy, ensued,
Tears cold against my skin, heart bleeds like a wound,
Everybody packed in, my church, st.andrews,
Brother crying on Dads shoulder,
Mother, I can't hold her,
How can I hug her when my touch is so frozen?
Scene is all set, suits are all pressed, flowers and headrests, name still nameless,
Pain is painless, I smile so faintly,
See my Godson, first time in ages, so sorry,
I'm alone, amoungst tears, alone wit thoughts,
An I feel so dead, like a corpse,
Of course, it not me there, layin, between 4 walls,
Cos I'm coughin an sneezin, in stalls this place so small,
Kinda closin in, a lot this don't make sense,
Willis person be ghostly, cum back like 6th sense?
I don't know, again... I can feel the pain,
The mood around me's a November rain,
Familys all here, like a Christmas day,
But they don't seem to notice me... Anyway,
I grasp myself so tightly, 1st speaker is Mum,
Deliver's her speech so proudly, am a proud son,
But Dad starts cryin, I give him a pat,
But my hand just seems to fall flat, what's that?
I'm lookin down, around me, vision is cloudy,
I'm dressed so smartly, but makeup on me?
I never did this, who did this too me?
Then it hits me, so quickly, who me?
I get up and walk to the altar,
No halt there! Stop it! Quit walkin! The service! You're interuptin! No nothin!
I stop at the coffin, I peep in,
Get the shock of my life, its me inside, sleepin,
My funeral....
 

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2009, 05:43:23 PM »
KILLED IT! :o 8)
 

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2009, 09:25:15 PM »
 8) umm not
 

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2009, 12:27:50 PM »
nice
"In a ball of confusion.... shoulda never had me" - Tupac
 

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #4 on: October 25, 2009, 03:25:27 PM »
 

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2009, 05:37:26 PM »
That's cold man! whoa

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2009, 08:49:51 PM »
That was fuckin' nice.
 

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Re: Funeral
« Reply #9 on: October 28, 2009, 08:36:18 AM »
 8)