Author Topic: im back  (Read 228 times)

westsiderider323

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im back
« on: December 14, 2009, 11:28:46 AM »
i spit phenomenal
say u better? yall comical
yall cant reach me look up im astronomical
tropical storm force flow
throw ya corpse tho
know im better of course tho
low is how i wear my fitted
wit it ill kill u cuz im quik witted
missin a bitch stick my dick in it
fuck now my dick gon itch in a minute
im so untouchable
on the level of unfuckable
like im walkin around wit AIDS and a burnin dick
yall heard it bitch
yall need to learn u cant earn even if i burned ya shit
for those that think they on my level
careful cuz ill have u runnin wit the devil
barrel to ya temple
u a bitch got u cryin hittin a left note
if u got the nerve to try to serve me
hurry cuz im waitin on ya ass to serve me
then ill hurt u serve ya parents wit ya head on the plate
everyone gon see a pussy bleedin like its menstruate
yall men hate cuz u cant get ya head straight
thats how i know yall not men straight
give me ya best punchline
faggot my punch will send u to the back of the lunchline
matter of fact 5 years back to the front of my punchline
then when u dead tell pun
im done wit this one son


 

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Re: im back
« Reply #1 on: December 15, 2009, 11:10:06 AM »
i spit phenomenal
say u better? yall comical
yall cant reach me look up im astronomical
tropical storm force flow
throw ya corpse tho
know im better of course tho

low is how i wear my fitted
wit it ill kill u cuz im quik witted
missin a bitch stick my dick in it
fuck now my dick gon itch in a minute
im so untouchable
on the level of unfuckable
like im walkin around wit AIDS and a burnin dick

yall heard it bitch
yall need to learn u cant earn even if i burned ya shit
for those that think they on my level
careful cuz ill have u runnin wit the devil
barrel to ya temple
u a bitch got u cryin hittin a left note
if u got the nerve to try to serve me
hurry cuz im waitin on ya ass to serve me
then ill hurt u serve ya parents wit ya head on the plate
everyone gon see a pussy bleedin like its menstruate
yall men hate cuz u cant get ya head straight
thats how i know yall not men straight
give me ya best punchline
faggot my punch will send u to the back of the lunchline
matter of fact 5 years back to the front of my punchline
then when u dead tell pun
im done wit this one son






i put in bold stuff that didnt really make sense to me. i mean i got what u were tryna say but i dont think those were even words haha.

i underlined the parts the i liked or thought was good. overall it seemed like a good warmup rap
 

westsiderider323

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Re: im back
« Reply #2 on: December 15, 2009, 01:44:28 PM »
i spit phenomenal
say u better? yall comical
yall cant reach me look up im astronomical
tropical storm force flow
throw ya corpse tho
know im better of course tho

low is how i wear my fitted
wit it ill kill u cuz im quik witted
missin a bitch stick my dick in it
fuck now my dick gon itch in a minute
im so untouchable
on the level of unfuckable
like im walkin around wit AIDS and a burnin dick

yall heard it bitch
yall need to learn u cant earn even if i burned ya shit
for those that think they on my level
careful cuz ill have u runnin wit the devil
barrel to ya temple
u a bitch got u cryin hittin a left note
if u got the nerve to try to serve me
hurry cuz im waitin on ya ass to serve me
then ill hurt u serve ya parents wit ya head on the plate
everyone gon see a pussy bleedin like its menstruate
yall men hate cuz u cant get ya head straight
thats how i know yall not men straight
give me ya best punchline
faggot my punch will send u to the back of the lunchline
matter of fact 5 years back to the front of my punchline
then when u dead tell pun
im done wit this one son






i put in bold stuff that didnt really make sense to me. i mean i got what u were tryna say but i dont think those were even words haha.

i underlined the parts the i liked or thought was good. overall it seemed like a good warmup rap

had to return some how and show certain people how to do lyrical shit
good lookin out my dude