Author Topic: "Turntable Situations" by Ind3cisiv3 (Read 299 times)

Gay-o Felony · « **on:** December 07, 2002, 10:24:01 AM »

Chorus :

Lost control for about 4 months, it all turned for the worse/
Felt like i was the only one going through this trauma, felt like a curse/
Had the power, and the right frame of mind, to put my enemies in a funeral hurse/
Watchin' my friends fade quicker than forgotten memories, watched them all dispurse/
If only they could of seen through my eyes, and the life i had to lead, found out how much it hurts/

Verse 1 of 1 :

As i looked at myself in the mirror, i wonder how people see me and how i react to the problem at hand/
Seeing me change my ways more times than wind directions, constant mood swings like the shiftin' of sand/
Then at night, on my own, lookin' into space, shoutin' louder than a fighter jets engines or a marchin' band/
No one could stop the trauma that would soon reach me, they only make it worse, is this what god planned?/
Watchin the two halfs of my life tear each other apart, felt like a movie, and i had the front seats/
No matter how much i called their names to stop, the arguements tor the roof off, neither would except defeat/
As world war three, made me evacuate my home, the grudge's grew stronger, as my life got stuck on repeat/
Wished i could of taken the memory back as it was faulty, "maam, could i change this?", but i wasn't given a reciept/
I'm findin' it hard to get through all this on my own, even though i have everyone around me, their not feelin' what im feelin'/
If only they could see how hard it is to put on a face over another one, covering up the bad times, wont make it go away, i need heelin'/
So to sacrafice my broken heart for the event in which my life would take me, to another place of refuge, this meant i was leavin'/
All other issues where makin' me struggle, i felt like fallin' to the ground, beg for forgiveness for what i havent done, i was believin'/

Chorus :

Lost control for about 4 months., it all turned for the worse/
Felt like i was the only one going through this trauma, felt like a curse/
Had the power, and the right frame of mind, to put my enemies in a funeral hurse/
Watchin' my friends fade quicker than forgotten memories, watched them all dispurse/
If only they could of seen through my eyes, and the life i had to lead, found out how much it hurts/

-- I went through a bad time in my life, but kept goin' strong, held on to that dream, and pulled my self through!

Feedback please!

Kill · « **Reply #1 on:** December 07, 2002, 11:33:03 AM »

I don't know what exactly it's about, what I do know is that you didn't post for a few months...I felt this spit, lyrically it was simplistic, but I felt it

Reef · « **Reply #2 on:** December 07, 2002, 01:58:01 PM »

Man.. I know what the shit was about and the way you put the whole situation in2 a rhyme was awesome. I felt it, and as my homie said it was simplistic.. But you expressed yourself really well!

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #3 on:** December 08, 2002, 03:57:14 AM »

Aiight thanx homies... anyone else got some feedback, this kinda important to me, want people to finally see what i went through,

basically, to cut about a 4month story short, my life turned round did a 360, fucked my emotions, sent em skyrocketin', my family broke up into two different segments of reality!

I was torn between both parts!

Feedback Please!

'Illicit' · « **Reply #4 on:** December 08, 2002, 02:27:51 PM »

hey, nice shit. I like some deep shit like that regardless of how simplistic it may be. dont matter as long as the delivery is good.

wheres verse 2 n 3? this might make a good song dawg.

keep blessin

Gay-o Felony · « **Reply #5 on:** December 09, 2002, 12:14:26 PM »

Thanx, well im hopin to do an audio version of it, but i dont know when tho, maybe i should start by gettin a mic!

Thanx Illicit, long time homies never stop rydin with me!

da_notorious_mack · « **Reply #6 on:** December 09, 2002, 12:20:26 PM »

dope shit homeboy,.......i like dat deep ish

can ya drop sum feedback on ya boy tho....times are hard

'Illicit' · « **Reply #7 on:** December 09, 2002, 03:07:53 PM »

man if you get a mic, holla I'd love to collab in this one. those the type of topics where I can write anecdotes to lol. think bout it. dont have tah tho.