Author Topic: FUUUUCK!!!!!! (Read 255 times)

An-Tony-O Montana · « **on:** December 29, 2002, 12:45:58 AM »

I typed up this ill keystyle and i forgot 2 type in the subject so i hit back n the shit was gone... it was some of my hottest shit in a while... fuck n, muthafuckin' message boards...

ya'll mc's is feeble n weak, l@@kin' like zombies, all pale @ the peak//
of wackness, my cd'z is "cold" cuz they don't come in a sleeve or jacket//
or even complete w/ an accurate tracklist, still thou believe that it's ma-gic//
cuz i'm the microphone sorcerer, i'll leave u banished, soul vanished after i plan it//
all out, my plot, so stop contridictin' the words of a "vet"//
and i don't work w/ animals but i'll still serve u a check, up//
declinin' yours all the while i boost my respect up//
next time ya'll need 2 come st8, not crooked or swiveled like desk chairs//
my rhymes is so hott that the text flares, like roman candles//
u can't c me but i c throu u like ya feet in sandals//
while ya'll throwin' scandals, @ me like tossin' the enquire around//
the only time u get ya girl wet is when u perspire, my sound//
alone, will get her moanin' out loud and fannin' her privates//
when my voice hits the mic in my hand i cause riots//
as tantrums break out, leavin' em in a sidateted state til they awake when i shout//
but there still mesmorized, lost in a sicluded area of there mind//
walkin' around with there arms out, stiff buried alive n confined//
in a coffin', cuz there breath stinks from all that shit talkin'//
and as for these bitches i seep in2 there pores n run throu there brain wrinkles//
i'm off the wire, like a cell phone, girl just give me the signal//
as i proceed 2 whip out my bald head like my name was howard finkle//
they give me brain but some of em is sick, they won't a shower of tinkle//
dangerouz mindz is vandals cuz we break in and down barriers
while ya'll remain lifeless like the insides of still baby carriers//
and i'm sick like that, while ya'll sound the same like a perfect match//
clonin' some1 elses rap w/ re-interpreted verses, intact//
until i break em down, line by line, i incline 2 ya mind w/ each rhyme//
like velcro snaps, ya'll keep comin' @ me weaker and weaker everytime//
so tell me, how the hell yo health gon last...

there... i tried to remember the shit wrote in the last one but i forgot lotz of it... i don't know wich one is better but i'm fuckin' pissed cuz the first shit i wrote was so sick but so's this... so holla...

Reef · « **Reply #1 on:** December 29, 2002, 04:17:16 AM »

not bad.. Thought the other spit was alot better thou homie

An-Tony-O Montana · « **Reply #2 on:** December 29, 2002, 04:55:18 AM »

this shit was fya when i first wrote it but i 4got 2 post the subject so i hit back and it was deleted... i was fuckin' pissed so i tried 2 re-write it but it was hard 2 remember what i put in it cuz i didn't read over it i just was typin' real fast n shit... it has was real ill metaphors thou that i think i forgot... thx for the feedback thou... i think this is the best line i ever thought of (juss my opinion n i don't wanna sound concedit for critiquin' my own shit) "dangerouz mindz is vandals cuz we break in and down barriers
while ya'll remain lifeless like the insides of still baby carriers//" <- the original line i think i had was sumethin' bout breakin' down mind barriers n runnin' throu brain wrinkles or somethin'... it was hott thou, i hate when i fuck up like that...

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