Author Topic: ~agitated minds~ (Read 583 times)

DeaDSouLjaH · « **on:** January 13, 2003, 02:06:02 PM »

~agitated minds~

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MINDS-COMPLETELY-AGITATED, we're making STRIDES-
VICIOUSLY-COMPLICATED/
we were CREATED , in a split second, love and innocence was DEFLATED n VACATED/
so many DEMENTED-SOULS, jus playin out their DISCONTENTED-ROLES/
some cant live up to parent's GOALS, while others live in fear of bullet HOLES/
the WORLD'S-THEIR-STAGE, not even God can CURL-THEIR-RAGE/
their thoughts unravel PAGE-BY-PAGE, which they held in their mind, BOTTLED AND CAGED/
this is the world as it IS , where jus being able to eat and PISS is like livin in BLISS /
every day of life is like a bullet MISSED, fearin we'll be the recipient of Satan's KISS/
hate feedin on the young minds like CANCER , all of em turnin ' GANGSTA ' /
non violence is not the ANSWER , killin and hatin is the only way to vent their ANGER/
GOD, you are GREAT, but your name is served on a PLATE, by people who dont think STRAIGHT/
drawing innocent people to use religion as a medium of HATE, to kill and to DESECRATE/
depression could be the RESULT-OF-POVERTY, then it feels like livin life is like an INSULT-OR-LIABILITY/
this is why they exhibit HOSTILITY , using money as a UTILITY to destroy all thoughts of CIVILITY/
life's like a WHORE, only more HARDCORE, it'll fuck yah but you wont ask for ANYMORE/
you are facin one long CHORE, only its one you cant IGNORE, it demands to be EXPLORED/[/b]

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Reef · « **Reply #1 on:** January 13, 2003, 02:14:01 PM »

Welcome back man.. U stayin around now?

Anyways that was some dope shit right there..

DeaDSouLjaH · « **Reply #2 on:** January 13, 2003, 08:44:10 PM »

some feedback will be appreciated.....
thanx

.:TimeLock:. · « **Reply #3 on:** January 14, 2003, 02:05:12 AM »

man that was real moving and deep homie good to have u back

keep writing stuff like that

Kill · « **Reply #4 on:** January 14, 2003, 09:18:17 AM »

Quote from: .:TimeLock:. on January 14, 2003, 02:05:12 AM

keep writing stuff like that

yeah, fa real that was dope

An-Tony-O Montana · « **Reply #5 on:** January 14, 2003, 09:01:11 PM »

Quote from: .:TimeLock:. on January 14, 2003, 02:05:12 AM

man that was real moving and deep homie good to have u back

keep writing stuff like that ;)

yeah that chit is deep... they tried to hate on me but i liked it//
u know how we do this shit two-face style, where mics git split//
good vs. evil in a new race 2 exist//
among the elite forces we're dismissed throu divorces//
where everday is like another stage or course 2 live//
this life is hell, to die is the only way 2 open heaven's gate//
and so many step inside but never make it passed there wake//
as theres soul's git stolen, dismissed or misplaced, left for the devil 2 take//
for heaven's sake, so now they all rock sixes, matter of fact make that 3//
in the casket, in the cemetary they drop pictures of me//
flyin' free... another lost one searchin' for a place 2 fit in//
n it gits me angry n agitated @ timez so i fill the need 2 cave ya shit in//
wit a brick in dim, light...
and they say that my futures grim, and i hate to admit it but there right...
so i take flight, like air jordan, i was an unfare, unwanted abortion//
and yet somehow i survived the extortion of original sin//
but i was baptised in the blood of a victim and cursed within' my system//
i was jerked around like a dick, starin' throu hurtin', unworkin' vision//
and yet i still managed to regain my strength throu verbal rehabiliation//
when before it was meditation n focused consentration throu herbal medication//
that had my heart racin', like i was strivin' for first place in//
this race against sin n the clock...
so i won't quit and ain't givin' up til my heart comes 2 a stop//
like a red light @ an intersection//
i flip my visor down and view my complection throu my reflection//
but it l@@ks like that pile of shit that i stepped in//
and so i wonder, could it be all the drugs that affected me like this//
or all the pain that i been throu, swingin' relentless but still worried i might miss//
holdin' a blunt, already twisted strugglin' 2 light this, and still livin' it like life ain't shit//
til i'm dismissed, deceased without a last wish or a final thought like springer//
my carcas will linger n decay like a amputated finger, as i lay//
in my box until the end of time like pac after my heats stops...
yea... after my muthafuckin' heart stops...

we drop verbal science, wit a squad to bomb on ya whole aliance -Lil' Fame (M.O.P) <- juss popped in my head for some reason so i wrote it down... no biting just quotin'...

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