Author Topic: track I'm writing with my little brother.... (Read 400 times)

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **on:** June 23, 2011, 11:04:45 AM »

he won't make a mill, in a century
i aint rappin, i'm just readin his wikipedia entry,

i'll infaltrate like trojan soldiers from inside a horse,
a baby with a butter knife,
against a samurai with swords,
a pitbull's bite, against a lions roar,
you got marshmellow hearts and stirephoam, spinal cords,

he's got fake methaphors and plastic similes,
i'll recycle ur rhymes to trash u lyrically

Blow Blow, how you like me now
You Flowd Mayweather and I'm Mannie Paqiyow
You diss me from the comfort of your mom's couch
But won't face me in any rhyme bout
I'll battle you in the flesh
I'll battle you in on the net
I'll battle you on a jet
on a plane to Pakistan I'll find you yet
Hide out in Abbotabad I'll still raid your whole set
your afraid, that's why your pants are wet
Talk shit on me but we ain't heard you on wax yet
You can't seperate fiction from facts, just a fat-head

referee

even if u battle me u'll fail
when blind ppl touch his face its like reading braille,
back in high school i smashed his chickadee,
to cut, she cut science class to visit me
we had the chemistry
attracted physically,
taught her sex ed and wood shop
now fahad is history.

I'm going to ignore this guy
talking about him looking like a porcupine
i know he went to record is lines and to say wether its written or not
i guess its borderlined...
so u can suck don't swallow,
bitch ur glasses r so thick u shud be the spokes model for coke bottles
think ur fucking hard, ur like a canada-rep all u fucking doin is go rehears ur canabis set

Using Lil Wayne as your rap idol
But when did Pac ever pass that title

really, i give a fuck abt a written rap, or repeated line,
and when the crwod goes home their repeating mine,
and u know what? nobody will be repeating urs,
that shit is wack as fuck,
what the fuck will they repeat them for?
and the thing thats so funny,
is i cud beat ur whole squad dummy
this dude flew cross country just to take a loss from me.
he looks like that dude max, the movie with eric stopes,
u'll look like frankenstein if ur neck had a pair of bolts,
and if u had some muscle and not such bi titties,
u'll look like micky ropes character mark from sin city.
my lyrics come from the mind,
ur lyrics are the shit,
only the shit that come out a horse behind.

the times is now betta set ur clock,
this is what i wud look like if my freckles popped,
reassign the dots on his face and play connect the dots,
he looks like the cover of a checkers box,
somebody get him some mentos his breath smells like espestos,

Greenbrigade · « **Reply #1 on:** June 23, 2011, 12:15:13 PM »

Wack. Does your brother also see 2pac as a father figure.

TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' · « **Reply #2 on:** June 23, 2011, 12:20:12 PM »

Quote from: Paddy McCourts Fenian Army on June 23, 2011, 12:15:13 PM

Wack. Does your brother also see 2pac as a father figure.

no, he was born after Pac died.. he see's Em as a father figure... I've raised him well

Triple OG Rapsodie · « **Reply #3 on:** June 24, 2011, 12:04:56 AM »

some lines actually sound decent, I'm guessing he wrote those

Native American · « **Reply #4 on:** June 25, 2011, 11:46:25 PM »

im not gonna diss but it is easy to write the lyrics, what a lot seem to fail at is the transition to recording over a actual beat. you prolly fave a thick accent and that may limit your range. but what the fuck do i know.....